Peter Dwight at 2010-03-01 14:30:30:
#2 - "... I want to figure out what he looks like from the way he talks."
and
#6 - "Never use the words "suddenly" or "all hell broke loose"".
I'm always trying to limit the character descriptions in action lines to keep the flow, but sometimes it's tough. And I hate reading 'suddenly', and I get angry with myself if that's all that comes to mind when I write line.