scriptwrecked at 2010-01-21 14:57:53:

Wow, some really nice touches in there. Good job Noah. Definitely a cut above.

Noah Pohl at 2010-01-21 15:19:41:

Thanks, Scriptwrecked!

cameron at 2010-01-21 15:20:42:

great minimalist film. felt real. how much was improvisational?

Noah Pohl at 2010-01-21 15:25:11:

The scene where they tell their respective stories was partly improvised - both those stories come from the actor's real lives. And the goodbye scene has some improv too.

jcarends at 2010-01-21 16:02:00:

Nice touches throughout, Noah. Storytelling first to last, as opposed to so many shorts that hide or lose the story underneath a lot of "filmmaking" clutter.

Eleven minutes very well spent. Thanks, and congrats!

Josh at 2010-01-21 23:08:38:

Great structure and editing on your part Noah. When that music cued in at the end- Rrright as he shut the door, that final moment HUgh, I really felt for him. I felt his sadness and even her desire to be kissed one last time. Anyways, I really enjoyed it for the many reasons that I'll just stick to one. It felt real and from the heart. A story worth telling.

Alex at 2010-01-21 23:52:04:

you know what i like most about this film? the use of silence and space between words. i always like it when there is air that hangs in a scene between two people who just look at each other. this is just a wicked cool movie.

Susan at 2010-01-25 21:38:03:

I love this movie. I love it so hard.

I made a blog post about it, too.

http://writertypepeople.blogspot.com/2010/01/expiration-date.html