Editing was off a bit, but I really liked the story. Well done!

Truth be told, I like this short version. I'm not sure if the pacing would benefit from being any longer. Most short filmmakers I know often wish they'd cut their material tighter.

Any story that begins with a shapely skirt suit is OK. It did seem like there was a lot of story left with the phone call and understanding who the "mysterious figure" is and even why the smoke alarm went off.

Good job.

I finally got a chance to see this, and I really liked it. :) It just goes to show you that making a movie doesn't have to cost eleventy billion dollars.