Nick at 2009-12-01 17:39:24:
To me, the bottom line is that the first ten pages of a script need to be exceptionally well-written. (So does the rest of the script, of course, but the beginning is worth putting extra energy into refining.) The greatest "hook" ever imagined is useless if the person reading the script doesn't feel like they're in the hands of a talented writer. But if the quality of your writing is up to par, people will want to keep reading even if you haven't managed to blow up the White House and take the President hostage in the first twenty lines.