Ryan H. at 2009-10-07 14:04:52:
The link isn't working for me.
Scott at 2009-10-07 14:45:36:
Link fixed. Thanks for the heads-up, Ryan H.
Vanilla Chunk at 2009-10-08 11:26:12:
Point 1 is great! I am going to try that tonight.
Point 2...your AUDIENCE might be Einstein, but the reader, the gatekeeper, the guy before the guy who sings the check? I've been meeting those guys and I'm not impressed. Low-level vocabulary, inability to catch vital changes in plot and setting and story; unwillingness to look beyond 'how will so-and-so dress for this part? Will there be cleavage?'

I'll definitiely check out the other points.
Vanilla Chunk at 2009-10-08 11:41:20:
SIGNS the check, not sings the check.