Lorenzo Colonna at 2016-01-13 00:43:44:
Yesterday evening, I read the last page of my TV pilot. I had to change/delete/rewrite some pages, but that's OK. It's part of the game.
I put the script in the drawer and I'll leave it there for two weeks, at least.
On February 1, I'm going to read it again.
I'm happy with the result, I like the contrast between the characters (but I must improve it a bit between two of them) and I love the ending. I'm not so sure about the cliffhanger of the first act, but I'll think about it after my next reading.