coyoteh017 at 2015-12-16 19:26:21:
On the night of his FATHER's DEATH, JIM the only SON of an OLD CRIME FAMILY, MUST LEAD POLICE ON A DANGEROUS SEARCH for a mysterious YOUNG WOMAN and his missing CAR, before their volatile alliance TURNs their TOWN against them all. A TOWN FINDs peace in the ramblings of an ENIGMATIC YOUNG WOMAN, who claims the end of DAYS are upon them unless they FREE a KILLER locked away for an OLD forgotten CRIME. With TIME running out, the SEARCH for ANSWERS FALLS ON TWO HIGH SCHOOL track STARs. BASED ON the GAME "An ASTRONAUT'S SEARCH for WATER," TWO NAZI KILLERs, with a faltering WORKING RELATIONSHIP, FIND A DANGEROUS secret in the HOUSE of the OLD TOWN BOOKstore owner.
whopperking at 2015-12-16 20:53:30:
BASED on a TRUE STORY. A STAR ASTRONAUT STARTs a RELATIONSHIP with a MAN WORKING with her. EVENTS TAKE A DANGEROUS TURN when she FINDS out HE'S dating another YOUNG WOMAN at the same TIME.
Shari at 2015-12-16 20:59:22:
The picture with the logline doesn't show up on my screen. Am I the only one? I already refreshed my screen but it doesn't help.
Scott at 2015-12-16 22:16:46:
Shari, sometimes WordPress is so wonky. I wrote the post, uploaded it, checked it, it was working, then for some reason, not. Anyhow I think I've fixed it. Can you see the photo now? Damn Computer Gremlin!
Dave Bullis at 2015-12-17 00:18:24:
1. A YOUNG BOY befriends an OLD Indian AGENT to help him find his SISTER's KILLER in the midst of the WAR of 1812. 2. BASED on a TRUE STORY a NAZI officer must stop a serial KILLER during World WAR II. 3. A POLICE officer and an FBI AGENT SEARCH for a dangerous KILLER terrorizing a TOWN before he MURDERS again.
lucketta at 2015-12-17 01:17:54:
When the POLICE, CIA and FBI fail to SAVE a YOUNG BOY from an OLD, KILLER AGENT, a desperate FATHER MUST commit his FIRST-EVER CRIME of MURDER to lure and FACE the man responsible for the DEATH of his SON. When a FAMILY in an OLD TOWN FIND OIL underneath their HOUSE, the FATHER sparks a series of DANGEROUS EVENTS that TURN their WORLD spiraling into DEATH and MURDER.
Gedaly at 2015-12-17 01:18:56:
MARTHA'S SON MUST TRY to disguise himself as a NAZI to LEAD his SISTER and FIVE FELLOW ASTRONAUTS to safety before a DANGEROUS KILLER breaks FREE and FINDS them.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 01:31:27:
When a YOUNG POLICE Captain, JOHN DAYS, FALLS for the lone survivor of an attempted MURDER, he MUST SEARCH and TRY to FIND ANSWERS and SAVE a WOMAN deeply in threaded Neo NAZI lore, and FACE a DANGEROUS FIVE MAN CREW inclusive of her FATHER and SISTER who hold the KEY to a BOOK, a DATE, and UNIT of the CIA who will start the next world WAR.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 02:00:12:
When, JOHN and JIM FELLOW, a YOUNG POLICE MAN and a FBI AGENT are LEAD, by their SISTER’s MURDER, to a TOWN BASED on an OLD WAR STORY told to them by their FATHER they FIND a KILLER NAZI UNIT WORKING BEHIND WORLD EVENTS, and two SONs must FACE and pay a for FATHER’s mistake and SAVE the FAMILY name.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 02:16:29:
When a FBI’s top KILLER, JOHN CREW, FALLS for a WOMAN WORKING in HIGH CRIME he MUST LIVE in a DANGEROUS RELATIONSHIP BASED on secrets and a SEARCH to FIND a TRUE ANSWER to being FREE, but his next HIT is his lover’s SON, the MURDER of her unborn SON.
dwallace at 2015-12-17 02:18:31:
With only TWENTY DAYS left of his HIGH SCHOOL senior YEAR, JOHN MUST get up the courage to talk to the girl HE'S been pining after since middle school before she moves out of TOWN to go to college. JOHN, a bumbling small time crook, tries to break his FATHER, a big time CRIME lord out of prison in order to GET his respect.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 02:34:44:
When an ASTRONAUT POLICE MAN DIES from drowning FIVE DAYS after WORKING a TOWN on a WORLD devoid of WATER, AGENT JIM STAR MUST FIND a LIVE KILLER DAYS before colonization and learns intergalactic politics breeds NEW CRIME and DANGEROUS RELATIONSHIPS.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 02:48:39:
FATHER JOHN SAVES, is a shining example to his FELLOW MAN but MUST FACE LIFE when he FALLS for a WOMAN that DAYS before used to be a MAN, and LEADs to a SEARCH for ANSWERS when TWO NEW lovers share TRUE love for the FIRST TIME.
dwallace at 2015-12-17 02:57:50:
All hell breaks loose when both FATHER JOHN and FATHER JIM FALL for SISTER MARTHA.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 03:18:49:
WHEN an OLD ENIGMATIC NAZI AGENT takes the STORY of his LIFE and CRIME into book form inexplicably his SEARCH for peace, to SAVE the memory of the WOMAN he loved, and need for a full LIFE of freedom in his last DAYS are met FACE to FACE with the echoes of DEATH in an OLD WAR, and the ghosts of MURDERed MAN, WOMAN, and child haunt him BEHIND every page threatening his LIFE’s work.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 03:26:33:
When, JOHN and JIM FELLOW, a YOUNG POLICE MAN and a FBI AGENT are LEAD, by their SISTER’s MURDER, to a TOWN BASED on an OLD WAR STORY told to them by their FATHER they FIND a vengeful KILLER NAZI UNIT WORKING BEHIND WORLD EVENTS, leaving two SONs must FACE and pay for a FATHER’s DANGEROUS mistake and SAVE the FAMILY name.
Aurélien Lainé at 2015-12-17 03:42:48:
When a YOUNG ASTRONAUT finds that both his ship's engine and communication system were remotely shut down after he landed on the moon, his FBI AGENT SISTER must bribe her way through the CIA and NASA to understand what went wrong and try to bring him home before his oxygen runs out.
Haris Leventi at 2015-12-17 04:33:40:
JOHN, a serial KILLER, unable to MURDER the baby BOY of the FAMILY he HIT, FINDS himself with a SON. TWENTY YEARs LATER, JOHN MUST FACE both the FBI and his SON looking for ANSEWRS.
Ricardo Bravo at 2015-12-17 05:53:24:
Ok. If I'm gonna do this, I'll work the odds in my favour. Here are FOUR loglines for your enjoyment. 1. A YOUNG FBI AGENT will join forces with a bitter OLD WAR hero to TAKE on a DANGEROUS CRIME FAMILY that has taken a whole TOWN ransom. 2. Corrupt POLICE officer JIM Snow is given ONE YEAR to LIVE. With nothing left to loose, he will START a MURDER spree to GET rid of the most DANGEROUS criminals. 3. In a WORLD torn apart by intergalactic WAR, ONE BOY left BEHIND in a DANGEROUS enemy planet holds the KEY to LIFE and DEATH. A UNIT of HIGH risk AGENTS MUST SAVE him before TWENTY DAYS or he will DIE along with everything else on the planet. 4. A coming of AGE STORY of a YOUNG BOY who MUST FACE LIFE as the FIRST EVER cloned MAN.
April Austin at 2015-12-17 07:52:50:
When a wave of DANGEROUS POLICE CRIMES disrupt a small TOWN, the DA MUST take on her FATHER, the POLICE chief, for her FIRST case, that STARTS a FAMILY WAR.
Michael Waters at 2015-12-17 08:17:38:
in a remote TOWN called MARTHA a DANGEROUS SISTER FALLS for the MAN everyone THINKS is her ASTRONAUT BROTHER's KILLER.
KarlGerhardt at 2015-12-17 09:48:09:
FAMILY MAN FINDS DANGEROUS BOY KILLER BEHIND HIGH SCHOOL YEARBOOK DEATH GAME.
KarlGerhardt at 2015-12-17 09:49:48:
FAMILY MAN FINDS DANGEROUS BOY KILLER BEHIND HIGH SCHOOL YEARBOOK MURDER GAME.
joshbarkey at 2015-12-17 09:57:07:
A DANGEROUS WORKING GRAMMAR NAZI who MURDERs in her FREE TIME FALLS FACE-FIRST into a RELATIONSHIP with her SISTER's OLD POLICE BOYfriend.
Monique Mata at 2015-12-17 10:33:14:
JOHN, A CIA AGENT, and JIM, a STAR ASTRONAUT, have FIVE DAYS to FIND and SAVE the YOUNG WOMAN they love from an OLD DANGEROUS BOOK NAZI and his KILLER SISTER who FIND a way to TURN the WORLD’s WATER into OIL. BASED on LIVE EVENTS.
Scott at 2015-12-17 10:57:59:
Good work, folks. Keep it up. And be sure to have some fun with it.
Feras at 2015-12-17 11:08:15:
A TWENTY YEAR OLD Muslim MAN living in Syria for TWO YEARS during the Syrian Civil WAR with his SON & YOUNG SISTER in an unsafe HOUSE, -LATER GETs confronted by an ex CIA Russian AGENT from ISIS, a DANGEROUS terrorist BASED organization, And then forced to bomb himself for their political reasons and in reTURN SAVEs his FAMILY's LIFE and FREE them from certain DEATH, Or Decline and DIE with them right there and then.. (Btw, i already wrote this script haha, it's called ALLAHU AKBAR)
Pj Woodside at 2015-12-17 11:54:04:
A WOMAN ASTRONAUT with TWO DAYS to LIVE MUST FIND a way to SAVE the WORLD and CHEAT DEATH by implanting her memories into a YOUNG CIA AGENT’S brain.
Jerry Glover at 2015-12-17 12:10:41:
Scott, is there a text list of the words? I can't make out a couple of the ones in the smallest font in the cloud image and zooming it doesn't help. Thanks.
marygoldman at 2015-12-17 13:17:49:
A TOWN FALLS in love with a WAR hero who was secretly part of a DEATH squad. A TOWN is terrorized by MARTHAS, CIA clones with MURDER on their minds. The FATHER of a MURDER victim plays a DANGEROUS GAME with a CIA AGENT he suspects is the KILLER. BASED on a TRUE STORY: a NAZI MUST SAVE a Jewish WOMAN who holds the KEY to the mystery of his missing SON. TWO SISTERS MUST solve an OLD CRIME in order to FIND their missing FATHER. FIVE FELLOW ASTRONAUTS MUST SAVE the WORLD from a KILLER virus.
marygoldman at 2015-12-17 13:22:05:
Ha! Love this! Made me LOL!
joshbarkey at 2015-12-17 14:04:02:
BASED on a TRUE STORY: JIM WATERMAN is the FIRST WORKING ASTRONAUT to smuggle weed on a rocket ship hoping to TRY and TAKE it and GET HIGH among the STARS. But ONE thing LEADs to another, and when a FELLOW CREW member FINDS out about this DANGEROUS CRIME and wants a piece of the action, MURDER is in the air and it's only a matter of TIME before people start to DIE.
Michael English at 2015-12-17 14:08:17:
1. BASED on TRUE EVENTS. A YOUNG MAN FINDS himself FACE to FACE with the CIA and FBI after the DEATH of his FATHER, a DANGEROUS NAZI AGENT. 2. The STORY of JOHN WATERs, and a LOOK BEHIND the EVENTS of his LIFE and his rise to STARdom. (Is that cheating?) 3. MARTHA'S FAMILY is the FIRST and last priority in her LIFE, until she FINDS her long-lost SISTER and her TWENTY million dollar bank account. 4. An FBI AGENT. An ASTRONAUT. A retired POLICE-MAN turned FATHER. What brings them together in the investigation of a MURDER, and what ANSWERS do they provide in the SEARCH for the truth?
joshbarkey at 2015-12-17 14:29:47:
BASED on a TRUE STORY: After the EVENTS of August 9, 2014, the Ferguson POLICE department became WORLD famous as KILLERS and MURDERERS. But ONE year LATER, journalist JOHN WATERMAN was determined to expose the even seedier STORY behind the STORY -- that most WORKING officers in that TOWN were part of a YOUNG GIGOLO CRIME "UNIT," chasing "the little DEATH" with any WOMAN who'd GET off on a MAN in uniform.
Jerry Glover at 2015-12-17 14:39:06:
1. JOHN, a YOUNG FBI AGENT and gay MAN, MUST TRY to reunite with his estranged FAMILY when his FATHER is implicated in a DANGEROUS terror plot. 2. When a NEW ASTRONAUT dies shortly after arriving at the International Space Station, JOHN FINDS out JIM was a CIA AGENT on a secret mission. With at least TWENTY DAYS before a shuttle arrives, can he complete the mission and stay alive with a DANGEROUS KILLER hidden among the CREW? 3. At AGE TWENTY, city-dweller JIM returns to his small homeTOWN when he inherits the struggling FAMILY farm after his FATHER's mysterious DEATH. When he finds plots of marijuana scattered among the corn fields, can he save the farm by selling the pot while dodging a DANGEROUS drug gang as well as the POLICE?
iheathen at 2015-12-17 15:59:34:
MARTHA’s DATE with JIM is the beginning of a KILLER RELATIONSHIP – he FALLS in love with her over the course of the night they spend together, at an OLD HOUSE, as she MURDERs the FAMILY that live there. JIM, an ASTRONAUT, returns home and FINDS his FAMILY MURDERED. His SEARCH for ANSWERS LEADs him into a DANGEROUS WORLD filled with modern NAZIs and FAKE CIA AGENTS, but the TRUE KILLER might be an ENIGMATIC member of his own CREW.
_Screenwriting at 2015-12-17 16:28:59:
In a LATER LIFE a KILLER must FACE the WOMAN whose SON’s LIFE he ended.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 17:18:14:
When a BOOK BEHIND the START of a new NAZI UNIT FALLS in the hands of a DANGEROUS CRIME FAMILY FBI and CIA MUST FACE the fact ONE HIT will LEAD to WAR.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 17:41:11:
A serial KILLER launches the FIRST EVER TWENTY minute LIVE internet feed as CIA and FBI MUST SEARCH and stop the MAN BEHIND "The KILLER MURDER HOUSE".
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 17:52:28:
When a DANGEROUS KILLER gets FREE and FINDS his HIGH SCHOOL YEAR BOOK FIVE DAYS before the TWENTY YEAR reunion, the EVENTS turn bloody.
Shari at 2015-12-17 18:00:33:
Yes, thanks !!
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 18:09:09:
When the FIRST EVER HIT of a YOUNG FBI AGENT FALLS short a DANGEROUS ENIGMATIC NAZI KILLER FINDS his FAMILY unaware leading to a deadly FACE off.
joshbarkey at 2015-12-17 18:58:54:
The FATHER of a NEW FBI AGENT named JIM JOHNSON will DIE in TWO DAYS if JIM can't FREE an ENIGMATIC, MURDERing NAZI on DEATH row. But a WOMAN HE'S just met (a STAR D.A.) PUTS EVERything on the line to help JIM FACE his enemies and keep the KILLER BEHIND bars.
Jerry Glover at 2015-12-17 20:35:02:
4. When she gave up a CRIME boss' coded BOOKs, the FBI gave her a NEW HOUSE, a NEW TOWN and a NEW LIFE STORY. But the object of MARTHA's NEW RELATIONSHIP has been provided by the CIA who want the advanced encryption KEY she created for their own purposes. 5. When HE'S not studying for SCHOOL or rowing CREW, TWENTY-YEAR-OLD JOHN is usually getting HIGH in his CAR. But when he meets the ENIGMATIC JIM, HE'S drawn into a DANGEROUS GAME that will end with him committing MURDER or his SISTER's DEATH. 6. Tn FIVE days, JIM will debut in a LEAD role as an ASTRONAUT-turned-superhero that could make him a WORLD-wide STAR. But he gets a phone call that threatens to reveal EVENTS he thought he'd left BEHIND. Will his teen-AGE flirtation with a neo-NAZI group destroy the glamorous LIFE HE'S built?
KarlGerhardt at 2015-12-17 22:31:24:
My money's on Mary Goldman for the win. Can I hire you to write my loglines? Nice one, Monique!
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-17 23:04:24:
SISTER MARTHA MUST FACE a SON she GAVE up as a DANGEROUS YOUNG CIA AGENT TWENTY YEARS earlier.
marygoldman at 2015-12-17 23:12:40:
A FBI AGENT FALLS hard for a WORKING GIRL while investigating the MURDER of her JOHN. A CIA AGENT DIES a new DEATH every time he SAVEs someone. An American ASTRONAUT from 2013 comes FACE to FACE with the NAZIS while accidentally time-travelling to WORLD WAR TWO.
marygoldman at 2015-12-17 23:14:11:
Thanks, Karl! Any time!
_Screenwriting at 2015-12-18 06:49:43:
When a SON of a ASTRONAUT FALLS to his DEATH, FAMILY EVENTS LEAD the FBI and CIA to SEARCH for his SISTER.
_Screenwriting at 2015-12-18 07:03:11:
When his SISTER becomes the LEAD suspect in a MURDER CRIME, FATHER JIM gets the help of his old SCHOOL friend CIA AGENT MARTHAS but who he is the KILLER?
Ricardo Bravo at 2015-12-18 08:34:06:
5. FIVE YEARS after the death of his SON a PULP STORY writer will leave the SECLUSION of his HOUSE to investigate an ENIGMATIC FAMILY who INDOCTRINATED a YOUNG BOY into believing HE'S the new Messiah, PITTING him against a whole TOWN.
Pj Woodside at 2015-12-18 10:37:52:
My daughter figured out the small ones: technician enigmatic pitting puts DA indoctrinated
Bell206 at 2015-12-18 10:58:42:
BASED on the NEW TRUE STORY, an OLD, ENIGMATIC movie producer invites a YOUNG WOMAN, MARTHA — SISTER of Heather and Heidi — to his HOUSE in Laurel Canyon for her FIRST EVER GAME of around the WORLD, only to FIND LATER she is a DANGEROUS, stone-FACE KILLER who LIVEs LIFE to the max as she LEADs him to within a millimeter of DEATH.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-18 11:35:49:
An ENIGMATIC HIT MAN MUST FIND and START LIFE AGAIN when his OLD WORLD CRIME FAMILY FALLS APART at the hands of a corrupt DA.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-18 11:46:21:
A YOUNG KILLER INDOCTRINATED into a NAZI DEATH UNIT MUST MURDER a STAR FBI AGENT and his SON in TWENTY four hours as a START to a series of DANGEROUS EVENTS culminating into a new WORLD WAR.
Erick C. Allen Sr. at 2015-12-18 12:03:39:
A film with FIVE FIRST UNIT DEATHs in TWENTY DAYS BOOK JIM the stunt MAN and DANGEROUS EVENTS FIND him on the set of "DIE KILLER TECHNICIAN DIE".
Jerry Glover at 2015-12-18 12:18:25:
Thank you and your daughter. Opens up a whole other set of options. And probably time to go see the optometrist for me.
Michael Waters at 2015-12-18 12:39:02:
A FATHER tells his side of the TRUE STORY of his DAYS WORKING on a DEATH STAR and his SEARCH to end a FAMILY WAR.
Ricardo Bravo at 2015-12-18 13:06:27:
Actually, it's not puts... it's pulp!
Judy Potocki at 2015-12-18 14:25:25:
A YOUNG WOMAN CIA AGENT MUST START WORKING with an OLD, ENIGMATIC NAZI KILLER and his CREW of FIVE INDOCTRINATED HIT men to stop her DANGEROUS ASTRONAUT FATHER, the MAN BEHIND a WAR GAME that will MURDER all LIFE in TWO DAYS via KEY DEATH-STAR EVENTS that will TURN all WATER in the WORLD to OIL.
Brian at 2015-12-18 14:34:40:
When a WORLD WAR breaks out on Earth, an ASTRONAUT WORKING on the International Space Station MUST fight to keep a DANGEROUS on-board weapon out of enemy hands. To SAVE his FAMILY, an ASTRONAUT MUST LEAD his CREW to FREE a KILLER from the most remote prison known to MAN — a facility orbiting Mars. The FIRST Lady, a former ASTRONAUT, MUST return to space to negotiate a peace treaty to SAVE the WORLD from a DANGEROUS alien colony.
Jerry Glover at 2015-12-18 14:48:27:
Star Wars gets the Wicked treatment? Is it followed by a ridiculously popular Broadway musical version? ;)
Brian at 2015-12-18 15:16:24:
Those last few were all sci-fi. Now it's bio-pic time! The TRUE STORY of a con MAN’s SON who would become America’s FIRST billionaire — OIL tycoon JOHN D. Rockefeller. In 1841, a YOUNG lawyer MUST TAKE on the Supreme Court to FREE a WOMAN and her infant SON from a LIFE of slavery. That lawyer would ONE DAY become President — Abraham Lincoln. The TRUE STORY of CRIME lord Delfina Gonzalez and her SISTER Maria — owners of a prostitution ring who would LATER be called the WORLD’s “most prolific MURDER partnership.”
Shari at 2015-12-18 15:38:19:
18 words from the logline. BASED on a TRUE FBI STORY: TWO SISTERS from a CRIME FAMILY who TURNED their LIFE are forced to MURDER their father's OLD enemy to SAVE their NEW TOWN and TWO YOUNG children form DEATH.
Bell206 at 2015-12-18 16:00:08:
BASED on a TRUE NAZI WAR CRIME STORY and the 2013 WORLD EVENTS that LATER cause the MURDER of the ENIGMATIC, CIA INDOCTRINATED, former ASTRONAUT, JOHN STAR-FACE, who DIEs BEHIND the OLD FALLS-TOWN SCHOOL while TRYing to SAVE a FELLOW KEY AGENT. His YOUNG SON, JIM, is doubtful of the official cause of death, PITTING Edema, because HE’s sure the FBI and local POLICE arranged the HIT on his FATHER. He TURNs to his SISTER, MARTHA, the DA, and they START WORKING a DANGEROUS GAME of LIFE and DEATH in a SEARCH to FIND ANSWERS and the KILLER. The investigation TAKEs a NEW direction when a BOY FINDS a seismic CREW report near their dad’s storage UNIT which indicates a possible FAMILY RELATIONSHIP between a MAN found in his CAR DAYS before in the HIGH WATER by the bridge, and a German WOMAN who LIVEs in SECLUSION at TWO TWENTY-FIVE PULP FREE Drive. They GET their ONE final LEAD at the HOUSE when the DATE and TIME stamped on the library card of a BOOK called The AGE of Petroleum: Fracking and Geology which verifies their dad’s assassination MUST be tied to the FIRST EVER OIL well drilled in the state.
Shari at 2015-12-18 16:42:34:
28 words from the cloud. The HIGH SCHOOL LIFE of JOHN and his YOUNG SISTER MARTHAS TURN upside down when they discover that their FATHER JIM was not an ordinary FAMILY MAN but a secret FBI man who was WORKING on a OLD NAZI WAR CRIME when he disappeared. In SEARCH of ANSWERS, they MUST FIND out what happened and START a DANGEROUS quest with a KILLER, the CIA and the POLICE BEHIND them.
joshbarkey at 2015-12-18 17:00:30:
EVENTS START to TAKE a TURN for the worst when TWENTY YEAR OLD STAR FBI AGENT JIM WATERMAN FALLS back into a RELATIONSHIP with his OLD CRIME FAMILY HITMAN BOYfriend: FIRST he FINDS out almost his entire FAMILY (his SISTER and FATHER) are PITTING themselves (BASED on their NEWly INDOCTRINATED religious beliefs) against anyONE who PUTS his MAN-UNIT into anything other than a WOMAN; then LATER HE’S on a WORKING DATE with an ENIGMATIC WOMAN ASTRONAUT his own AGE and FINDS she has a TRUE STORYBOOK written by FREE CAR salesman JOHN JOHNSON that ANSWERS KEY questions BEHIND a famous WORLD WAR TWO NAZI MURDERer’s SEARCH to FIND a better way to GET HIGH. It’s a LIFE and DEATH struggle, and with only TWENTY minutes left to SAVE his mother MARTHA’S HOUSE from a river of burning OIL and FACE his KILLER lover’s CREW of DANGEROUS FELLOW Mafioso’s, TIME is running short on possibly the most complicated and endearing romantic comedy EVER.
Marion Mund at 2015-12-18 17:21:23:
After an alien ASTRONAUT crash lands in their garage, a YOUNG WOMAN has to SAVE her TWENTY-something, always-HIGH, loser SISTER from being MURDERed by their CAR TURNed intelligent KILLER, in this TRUE STORY of a FAMILY RELATIONSHIP being fixed in the wake of a secret STAR WAR lurking BEHIND the scenes.
Marion Mund at 2015-12-18 17:30:31:
Whoops, not really a true story, no. Sorry guys.
David Proenza at 2015-12-18 20:03:48:
A broken FAMILY must defend their TOWN (and try to mend their own RELATIONSHIPS) after it's invaded by NAZI ASTRONAUTS crash landing after a 70 year secret mission.
huckabees at 2015-12-18 20:07:16:
1. A cranky WORLD WAR TWO veteran MUST leave his LIFE of SECLUSION BEHIND to SAVE his estranged pacifist SON and his FAMILY from the DANGEROUS influence of a YOUNG ENIGMATIC MAN who claims to be the NEW messiah but looks exactly like his OLD NAZI nemesis from 1945. 2. Bored to DEATH on a routine space mission, a jaded YOUNG ASTRONAUT dabbles in the occult and accidentally FINDS a way to TURN his FIVE FELLOW CREW members into mediums who can channel alien spirits.
Brian at 2015-12-18 20:36:06:
Action-Comedy anyone? When a POLICE force in India enlists the CIA to help stop organized CRIME in Bollywood, a female AGENT is sent undercover as an actress to investigate. Her plans TAKE a TURN when she becomes an overnight STAR. Miss Congeniality in Bollywood. TWO DAYS before his wedding, an FBI AGENT discovers he mailed his SAVE the DATE cards to the wrong people — the FAMILY members of the CRIME lords HE’S put away. After the DEATH of a FELLOW officer at the hands of an ENIGMATIC KILLER, a street-wise cop is paired with an unlikely NEW partner — an artificially intelligent POLICE CAR.
GuildoFawlkes at 2015-12-18 20:54:36:
In an AGE when all DEATH is a CRIME and nobody grows OLD, an INDOCTRINATED AGENT is given reLIFE so he can SEARCH for his own ENIGMATIC KILLER.
Jerry Glover at 2015-12-18 21:31:12:
One last set of entries, since this turned out to be such a fun and interesting brainstorming exercise. 7. After inheriting her FATHER'S German country HOUSE, MARTHA'S LIFE is put in peril when she FINDS a secret door in the basement leading to an underground NAZI bunker filled with stolen artworks and an enigmatic BOOK containing DANGEROUS ANSWERS to questions no one dares to ask. 8. Conservative MARTHA'S prim and proper WORLD is TURNed upside down when JOHN, her TWENTY-YEAR-OLD SON arrives home from SCHOOL with JIM, his NEW BOYfriend in tow. Can she and her FAMILY SAVE FACE when her small-TOWN neighbors learn about JOHN and his NEW RELATIONSHIP? 9. BASED on a TRUE STORY: a DA MUST SEARCH for ANSWERS in the DEATH of an 80-YEAR-OLD WOMAN killed in her own HOUSE when a special POLICE UNIT conducts a no-knock drug raid. (Sadly, a true story about rogue officers in Atlanta's "Red Dog" unit.)
CANDICEO at 2015-12-18 22:07:49:
the MURDER of a YOUNG BOY brings FBI AGENT JIM MARTHAS to the small TOWN of WATER in SEARCH of ANSWERS but a series of ENIGMATIC EVENTS will TURN his WORLD upside down and LEAD him TO FACE THE SON OF MAN a KILLER as OLD as TIME.
NewYorkOrbit at 2015-12-18 23:16:48:
"INDOCTRINATED," BASED on the 2013 BOOK of the YEAR "HIGH FALLS," is the TRUE STORY of WORLD's FIRST POLICE WOMAN SISTER MARTHAS St. JOHN, who--at the AGE of TWENTY-TWO--shocked the WORLD with her RELATIONSHIP to JIM HOUSE, and the EVENTS surrounding this ENIGMATIC MAN accused for MURDER on their FIRST DATE. To SAVE him from DEATH, she FINDS she MUST not only get BEHIND the wheel of a NEW CAR and TAKE her CREW of FELLOW nuns into a DANGEROUS OIL TOWN to TRY getting ANSWERS from a KEY witness (a NAZI WAR criminal) , she must also outrun the FBI and the D.A. who are WORKING to arrest her, FACE her FATHER and her fear of deep WATER, and START to LIVE her NEW LIFE as a FREE AGENT to expose the real KILLER in TIME.
Pj Woodside at 2015-12-18 23:17:19:
TWO OLD WOMEN ditch a funeral and their FAMILIES and HIT the road to GET HIGH, FIND MEN, and SEARCH for the Fountain of YOUNG.
xwingpilotred1 at 2015-12-19 01:06:54:
In a SEARCH to FIND the KILLER of his DA FATHER, YOUNG FBI AGENT JIM TOWNSON uncovers a DANGEROUS conspiracy. With TIME running out, Jim’s SEARCH for ANSWERS LEADS him FACE to FACE with his OLDest rival – his SISTER. In an alternate TIMEline 2013, when TWO NAZI ASTRONAUTs threaten to ignite a WORLD WAR, OLD SCHOOL CIA AGENT JOHN WATERCAR MUST TURN to the ONE KILLER HE’S always feared WORKING with: the ENIGMATIC, mass MURDERer turned FBI informant JIM LIFESON. A YOUNG WOMAN INDOCTRINATED in an ENIGMATIC cult and living a LIFE of SECLUSION in her FAMILY’s OLD HOUSE is visited by DEATH himself and given TWO DAYS to LIVE unless she FINDS the ONE true love of her LIFE. MARTHA’S TOWN FACEs a MURDERous CRIME rampage by neo-NAZI SCHOOL janitors unless the YOUNG DA and her FELLOW POLICE AGENTs can GET neo-NAZI leader JIM-JOHN Newton the FATHER HE’S always been SEARCHing for. YOUNG rabble-rouser JIM FINDS a BOOK that transports him to 2013 where he MUST ANSWER for CRIMEs he didn’t EVER intend to commit. A WAR ends after TWENTY-ONE YEARS. This is the TRUE STORY of the YOUNG CIA AGENT and the ENIGMATIC OLD WOMAN who’s RELATIONSHIP LEAD to the FIRST EVER ceasefire between TWO nations INDOCTRINATED to MURDER each other.
xwingpilotred1 at 2015-12-19 01:39:02:
TWO SISTERS in SEARCH OF ANSWERS about the EVENTS that LEAD to the SECLUSION of their FATHER in solitary confinement uncover a STORY of LIFE, DEATH, and DANGEROUS RELATIONSHIPs that threatens to TURN the WORLD of their small TOWN upside down. When YOUNG HITMAN JOHN KILLERSON accidentally MURDERs his BOYhood hero, ASTRONAUT JIM Parsons, he finds his TIME is short as his ex-flame, former CIA AGENT turned DA, MARTHA YOUNGONE, closes in, intent on ONE last FACE to FACE to settle shortcomings in their TWO YEAR gone RELATIONSHIP.
Andy Davie at 2015-12-19 07:52:47:
The WORKING RELATIONSHIP between an FBI AGENT and her CIA counterpart, is pushed to the limit when their SEARCH for the KILLER of an ASTRONAUT uncovers a conspiracy threatening the survival of MAN and risks an interstellar WAR for control of our WORLD.
Joe at 2015-12-19 11:34:21:
BASED on the TRUE STORY of the CREW of the FIVE DANGEROUS and YOUNG FBI and CIA AGENTs JIM, JOHN, MARTHA, DA and STAR who have to SAVE the TOWN's SCHOOL when it is HIT by a CRIME wave of MURDERers and KILLERs consisting of a NAZI, a POLICE officer, an ASTRONAUT, a FATHER, a WOMAN a MAN, a SISTER and a SON. As their RELATIONSHIP is stretched to a NEW HIGH and TIME is of the essence, they MUST TRY to SEARCH for ANSWERS to this WAR, WORKING as a FAMILY and a UNIT. Things TAKE a TURN for the worse, as the AGENTs FIND out that ONE of them may be BEHIND this GAME of DEATH, PITTING these FELLOW ENIGMATICs against each other as their OLD WORLD FALLS apart.
Joe at 2015-12-19 11:42:03:
I know that my logline is too long, lacks a comedic punch and kind of reveals the twist of the "story" but my intention was just to use as many words as possible and make it into a somewhat coherent logline.
Mitch at 2015-12-19 11:51:21:
BASED on a TRUE STORY, the FIRST FAMILY's SON FINDs a KEY hidden in an OLD BOOK in the White HOUSE and they FIND that they MUST solve the DANGEROUS GAME described in the BOOK within TWENTY DAYS to SAVE everyone from a NEW WORLD WAR.
LuckyandDead at 2015-12-19 15:11:50:
CIA FALLS in a RELATIONSHIP with a serving LIFE imprisonment OLD NAZI ASTRONAUT JIM in a FACE of EVENTS that LEAD WORLD of STAR, AGE of TWENTY, to DEATH, whose KEY-to-LIFE, YOUNG INDOCTRINATED SISTER, FALLS in a TRUE love with JIM's FATHER, a hard-WORKING KILLER BEHIND the GAME.
Pj Woodside at 2015-12-19 16:38:08:
I believe the contest closed yesterday, midnight Pacific time (according to the instructions at the top). Love all the great loglines!
Pj Woodside at 2015-12-19 17:32:51:
Never mind -- it's been extended to tonight. Just saw that!