Anything that doesn't feel right probably ain't right.

Nizo, reminds me of that quote from Paddy Chayefsky: "If it should occur to you to cut, do so. That's the first basic rule of cutting. If you're reading through and stop, something is wrong. Cut it. If something bothers you, then it's bad. Cut it. Cutting leads to economy, precision, and to a vastly improved script."