Susan W. at 2015-08-04 20:26:31:
Hi Scott -- There's a bit of a hero's journey here as well. We open on Amy's ordinary world. Then girl meets boy is the call to adventure. She resists the call to adventure, but then crosses the threshold. We meet her mentor (her sister -- even her dad could be viewed as a mentor). She approaches the inner most cave (he say's he loves her!) and then there is the ordeal -- she is too scared to let him in, so she pushes him away. But she finds a road back, and the whole thing ends "happily ever after." And she is transformed. It's very satisfying -- even if it is fantasy -- because it hits all these story notes.
I actually think I enjoyed it so much partly because it DOES have a traditional structure. The treatment was fresh and young -- but the structure was old reliable. I think that's great!
Cheers! Susan W.