PaulG at 2015-04-30 15:39:50:
I found “Lincoln” instructive on the subject of the psychological journey primarily because the story doesn’t seem to fit the standard paradigm of character development. The standard paradigm is a Protagonist possesses a flaw that jeopardizes the outcome of his struggle. The Protagonist is in a potentially fatal state of Disunity.
But this story opens in January, 1865 with a Protagonist whose character has been forged in the crucible of the Civil War. Abraham Lincoln has already grown to become one of greatest, one of the best Presidents the country will ever have. Lincoln would seem to have no character flaw worth worrying about. Lincoln is a portrayed as a steadfast character, a man who doesn’t change because he doesn’t need to change. In the battle to free the slaves, he’s on the side of God and history.
In contrast, his wife, Mary Todd Lincoln, is a deeply flawed character, the source of grievous Disunity in Lincoln’s personal life. Principal among her problems is that she still grieves the death of her son, Willie, three years earlier from typhus. She vehemently opposes her oldest son, Robert, enlisting, fearing she will lose him also.
As I noted in discussing the major plot points, Kushner resolves this Disunity by weaving the story thread of Mary’s psychological journey into the struggle for the 13th Amendment. Initially, she has no personal stakes in the political fight. But when she can see her way to becoming a major stakeholder in the 13th Amendment, she gives her consent for Robert to enlist. The two issues are joined: “Since you are sending my son into the war, woe unto you if you fail to pass the amendment.”
Now then. In the standard paradigm, the Protagonist is opposed by the singular character of the Antagonist. Who is that in this story? Well, take your pick: from the Confederacy, from Congress, from the press, the public at large. Lincoln is attacked on all sides by opponents and critics. But it seems to me that none of them is sufficiently salient to be the Antagonist in Chief to the Commander in Chief.
Nor, I submit, does Lincoln have a worthy Nemesis. What’s the difference between an Antagonist and a Nemesis?
I confess I was initially skeptical about Scott’s preference for the term Nemesis rather than Protagonist. But I have come to consider Nemesis to be a more effective term to use in characterizing the primary adversary.
The Nemesis seems to be a species of Antagonist who at the start of the story possesses more power, more resources than the Protagonist. The Nemesis is an Antagonist who forces the Protagonist to undergo a psychological journey of growth and transformation in order to overcome the Nemesis -- and any other obstacles -- and achieve the dramatic purpose.
But Lincoln asserts “I am the President of the United States of America, clothed in immense power.” That’s a fact, not a boast. So scratch out Lincoln having a Nemesis in terms of any one man who has more power.
Another trait of the Nemesis is an unerring ability to attack the Protagonist's Achilles heel, his character flaw. That’s why the Protagonist must transform to ultimately prevail. But, as I said, I can find no character flaw in Lincoln that places the 13th Amendment in jeopardy.
But there is a flawed character who can make or break the 13th Amendment. And a Nemesis lurking in the story waiting to exploit his flaws. The pivotal and flawed character is Thaddeus Stevens, leader of the radical Republicans. His Nemesis is the minority leader,George Pendleton.
Stevens’ flaws are the hubris of uncompromising, moral zeal and a lack of discipline to temper his tongue. Pendelton knows his flaws and exactly how to exploit them. He orders a colleague to “... taunt him... get him to proclaim what we all know he believes in his coal-colored heart.” If Pendleton can exploit Stevens’ flaws, the 13th Amendment is doomed.
But Stevens, though no fan-boy of Lincoln, heeds the President’s counsel, curbs his tongue, says what he has to say instead of what he wants to say. He compromises his own sense of integrity for the greater cause of the 13th Amendment.
For me, this script is a good example of not only the dramatic importance of having a genuine Nemesis, but how to inject one into a story when the Protagonist doesn’t appear to have a qualifying character flaw to exploit. Give a potentially fatal flaw to a pivotal character, someone who can make or break the Protagonist’s story goal.
Okay, I’ve said that Lincoln has no character flaw worth worrying about, no Nemesis, no worthy Antagonist. And yet Lincoln does change. He's forced to change. How? Does it qualify as a psychological journey? Or...?