Tom at 2009-02-12 08:44:00:
Nice twist on The Parent Trap. It's definitely a 'similar but different' world.
robert at 2009-02-12 13:51:00:
Such a simple twist on a traditional story opening all sorts of possibilities. I am guilty as a writer, as you may be too, of being too much in my own head instead of keeping an ear out for these little kernals to insinuate themselves into your imagination. an example on the same theme my sister is divorced and her daughter was boasting of how much more stuff she gets, and how much more she gets away with, she calls it guilt giving and she plays both parents off against each other, no doubt what happens in this story.