PaulG at 2015-03-11 15:30:16:
Okay, here is my breakout of the sequences.
As before, my m.o. has been to think “reel” – to break down the script into 10-15 minute reels, the way movies were cut in the early days of cinema to accommodate the technical limits of projectors. The challenge in trying to do this with the script for “The Social Network” is that the sequences read longer in the script (163 pages) than they play out in ‘reel time’ (120 minutes).
As before, each reel (except the last) ends on a cliff hanger beat. The question I tried to answer in deciding what is the cliff hanger beat is not: what is the logical flow of the story (in terms of plot points)? Rather it is: what is the emotional flow? How is the movie structured in terms of the audience’s experience?
If this movie were shown with an old-fashioned projector that could only play a 15 minute reel, where could the movie be cut so as to leave the audience in the dark (literally in those days!) wondering, worrying, curious -- desperate to know: what happens next?
Or in modern venues, how to keep the viewer’s eyeballs and attention focused on the screen, not drifting to their smartphones? (Unless the smartphone is the venue.)
My choice of cliffhanger moments is arbitrary. In some sequences, there is a good argument to be made for a different choice. Which I blame squarely on Aaron Sorkin. He skillfully crafted his script with so many cliff hanger beats between scenes as well as sequences—there are too many good choices!
REEL #1 – A romantic crash leads to a network crash:
What happens: Erica dumping Mark provokes him to foolish words and mischief on the Harvard network.
Cliffhanger beat (p21-22): Thanks to the popularity of Mark’s FaceMash, the Harvard network crashes.
Cliffhanger question: What will be the consequences for Mark?
REEL #2 – Notoriety leads to Opportunity:
What happens next: Impressed with the hacking skills that got Mark into trouble, the Winkelvoss twins and their friend Divya Narendra offer him a chance to redeem himself by helping them code their concept for a social networking site.
Cliffhanger beat (p39-40): Mark decides to build his own social network site rather than one for the Winkelvoss twins.
Cliffhanger question: Will he pull it off?
REEL #3 – The Devil in the Details – and the Deceit:
What happens next: Mark codes his website while putting off the Winkelvoss twins with one excuse after another.
Cliffhanger beat (p56): After discovering that Mark’s website has gone live, Divya Narendra rushes out to inform the Winklevoss twins that Mark has stolen their idea.”
Cliffhanger question: What will the Winklelvoss twins do to Mark?
REEL #4 – Breaking the rules:
What happens next: Mark’s website and reputation grow as the 'Harvard Gentlemen’ dither and argue about how to stop him.
Cliffhanger beat (p83): The Winkelvoss twins will go to the top, appeal to the President of Harvard , Larry Summers, to stop Mark.
Cliffhanger question: a two-fer: Will they get satisfaction from Larry Summers? And ”Why Stanford?” –Cameron, wondering about Mark’s expansion plans.
REEL #5 – The fox and the chicken:
What happens next: Sean Parker discovers The Facebook website, realizes its potential, takes a meeting in New York with Mark, undermines Eduardo’s influence. (And Eduardo has to deal with a petty scandal over a chicken.)
Cliffhanger beat (116): In spite of his misgivings about Mark being enthralled by Sean Parker, Eduardo pitches in $18,000 but doesn’t join Mark in California.
Cliffhanger question: “I figured… how much could go wrong in three months?”
REEL #6 – The fox in the chicken coop:
What happens next: Mark comes under Sean’s spell. Eduardo becomes marginalized.
Cliffhanger beat (p136): Frustrated and humiliated, Eduardo freezes the bank account he had set up for Mark.
Cliffhanger question: Will this sabotage Mark’s effort to grow the website?
REEL #7 –Venture Capital:
What happens next: Sean enables Mark to obtain venture capital to keep growing the web site, but that requires major changes in structure and stock ownership.
Cliffhanger beat (p147-148): Eduardo returns to California for the millionth member party unaware of the reorg.
Cliffhanger question: “What were you called out there for?”—Gretchen. “An Ambush”- Eduardo.
REEL #8 –Lawyer Up:
What happens finally: The dilution of Eduardo stock and influence is complete, his relationship with Mark irrevocably destroyed. Time for everyone lawyer up. Including Sean Parker after getting busted for drugs. Mark will have to settle with the twins and his ex-best/only friend. But the punishment amounts to a “speeding ticket”, a small price to pay for spectacular fortune and fame. But what price has Mark paid in terms of his integrity?
And we are left to wonder on the irony that the master architect of the world's biggest web site for connecting to others was [in the 'creation myth' that is "The Social Network"] so incompetent when it comes to connecting to others himself.