"At JEFFERSON and FRANKLIN's MARRIAGE, DEATH FINALLY DETERMINED what INCURABLE LOVE really MEANS in WASHINGTON. To CELEBRATE, the REAPER DECIDES to get DRUNK and ENHANCE CANCER AROUND CONGRESS."

"LILY's LIFE is TRAPPED in a RELATIONSHIP without DESIRE. When she DECIDES to FINALLY FIND LOVE, she PAYS JEFFERSON, a NEUROSCIENTIST to TURN her JOB into the PERFECT DEBAUCHERY ENGINE."

DRUNK with INCURABLE DESIRE, NEUROSCIENTIST LILY DISCOVERS a cure for MELANCHOLIA.

JEFFERSON JOBPERFECT is DETERMINED to end his LIFE (via DEATH). That is, until he MEETS LILY WRONGLOVE at a NEUROSCIENTIST SCIENCE CONGRESS (in AMERICA). THEIR RELATIONSHIP renews his PASSION and LAUGHTER. That is, until she is DIAGNOSED with INCURABLE DEATH CANCER. Will LOVE, MARRIAGE, and/or his skill as a CELLIST be enough to SAVE her?

"LOVE ENDS with MELANCHOLIA, SCIENCE with VIRTUOSITY ! What LILY and FRANKLIN REALIZE in this COMEDY-DRAMA will SAVE their LIVES FOREVER..."

LILY, a CELLIST DIAGNOSED with INCURABLE CANCER,is ASSIGNED to play for JEFFERSON, a NEUROSCIENTIST overcome with the MELANCHOLIA from the LOSS of his WIFE. LILY'S PASSION for LIFE and the music TEMPORARILY BECOMES the ENGINE that drives their COMPANIONSHIP. One DRUNK NIGHT, a POWERFUL DECLARATION of his DESIRE for MARRIAGE MEANS a race for the altar before she will DIE

This is awesome and fun. Although, I did add "ing" to "engage." Hope that's alright. Here's mine: When a NEUROSCIENTIST FINALLY DISCOVERS a POWERFUL cure for CANCER he celebrates by ENGAGING in a NIGHT of DEBAUCHERY only to REALIZE the next morning that in his DRUNK stupor he consumed his CANCER remedy along with alcohol which appears to have led to an INCURABLE, IMMORTAL HANGOVER.

TRAPPED by INCURABLE DEBAUCHERY and battling a HISTORY of MELANCHOLIA, JEFFERSON the LUTHIER leaves his WIFE and DISCOVERS what he thinks is PERFECT LOVE with a CELLIST named LILY REAPER. He tunes her cello by day, she performs with perfect VIRTUOSITY by night. DEATH is her PASSION and with each POWERFUL performance he begins to DIE a bit more and realizes LILY is IMMORTAL. DETERMINED to fight DEATH, he DISCOVERS how to stop TIME, change HISTORY, and FINALLY find LOVE.

An IMMORTAL, DRUNK REAPER must kidnap a NEUROSCIENTIST to SAVE himself from a POWERFUL and deadly HANGOVER.

An OUTRE' REAPER that accidentally killed Thomas JEFFERSON must FIND the DECLARATION of INDEPENDENCE before SEPTEMBER ENDS or the HISTORY of AMERICA will TAKE a very bad TURN.

After his beloved WIFE is DIAGNOSED with INCURABLE CANCER, a MELANCHOLIC CELLIST embarks on a NIGHT of DEBAUCHERY, has a ONE NIGHT stand with the Grim REAPER and BECOMES temporarily IMMORTAL before teaming up with a MELANCHOLIC NEUROSCIENTIST to find a cure before DEATH PAYS a visit and ENDS the WORLD--and their LIVES--FOREVER.

A DETERMINED screenwriter must FIND the PERFECT logline before an IMMORTAL webmaster DECIDES to TAKE his LIFE.

After REALIZing something is MISSING from his LIFE, a POWERFUL and perpetually DRUNK CONGRESSman named JEFFERSON FRANKLIN-WASHINGTON FINALLY DISCOVERS his PASSION and gets the PERFECT JOB... as a CELLIST.

A COMEDY-DRAMA that CELEBRATES the RELATIONSHIP between LILY and FRANKLIN, both FALLEN IMMORTALS, who are ASSIGNED to DOCUMENT a day in the LIFE of the REAPER in AMERICA and DISCOVER something more POWERFUL than LIFE and DEATH... LOVE and LAUGHTER.

Hehe ! I hereby declare Lorenzo Colonna the King of Logline ! Love them :)

A part-time NEUROSCIENTIST/part-time LUTHIER and his CELLIST CLIENT (JEFFERSON FRANKLIN-WASHINGTON) FIND themselves TRAPPED inside a viola and must use SCIENCE and VIRTUOSITY to escape and SAVE the WORLD before TIME runs out!

LILY CONTINENTAL is ASSIGNED an IMMORTAL DRUNK to SAVE FRANKLIN, WASHINGTON and JEFFERSON from DEATH, using her POWERFUL HISTORY ENGINE.

It's election time in a FUTURE AMERICA crippled by INCURABLE DEBAUCHERY and CONGRESS DECIDES to create JEFFERSON FRANKLIN, a PERFECT robotic candidate, only to have him challenged by the "WASHINGTON MACHINE," created by a POWERFUL group of NEUROSCIENTISTS.

JEFFERSON FRANKLIN-WASHINGTON — the heroic CELLIST LOVEd by movie audiences AROUND the world — travels back in TIME to colonial AMERICA only to DISCOVER that he must serenade the CONTINENTAL CONGRESS with the greatest musical performance of his LIFE; if he plays even ONE WRONG note, the DECLARATION of INDEPENDENCE will NEVER be signed, MEANing the END of AMERICA — and all of HISTORY — FOREVER.

a POWERFUL COMEDY-DRAMA about DEATH, LOVE and forgiveness. JEFFERSON, an IMMORTAL, FINDS the LOVE of his LIFE, LILY. but the girl fights with an INCURABLE disease, CANCER. will their LOVE lasts, or they're going to be SEPARATED by pain and MELANCHOLIA?

When a SCIENCE project makes a NEUROSCIENTIST IMMORTAL, he’s DETERMINED to turn AMERICA into a POWERFUL state and FINISHES its enemies, one by one.

"NEVER LOVE" Every LOVE of LILY REAPER'S LIFE has DIEd and she DECIDES she will be FOREVER MISSING COMPANIONSHIP. Until she MEETS the PERFECT French CELLIST LUTHIER OUTRE. Consumed with PASSION LILY BECOMES DETERMINED to SAVE herself from a LIFE of MELANCHOLIA. But can she risk DESIRE if it MEANS that LUTHIER must DIE?

"PERFECT ENDS" When JEFFERSON LOVE is DIAGNOSED with INCURABLE LAUGHTER he DECIDES to SAVE the WORLD from MELANCHOLIA before he DIEs.

"Grim REAPER" When DEATH gets DRUNK, the hangover is IMMORTAL

Love it!

That's the spirit, folks! Remember: Deadline is Friday, October 10 at Midnight Pacific Daylight Time. You can enter as many times as you like. Please post your loglines here in this thread, not via email to me. Thanks and keep having fun with this challenge!

“Dude, Where’s My DECLARATION of INDEPENDENCE?” Benjamin FRANKLIN and Thomas JEFFERSON wake up with a HANGOVER and have to find the MISSING DECLARATION OF INDEPENDENCE before WASHINGTON loses AMERICA. “Dude, Where’s My Constitution?” George WASHINGTON and Benjamin FRANKLIN wake up with a HANGOVER and have to find the Constitution before JEFFERSON gets DRUNK. “Dude, Where’s JEFFERSON?” FRANKLIN and WASHINGTON must escape CONGRESS to get to Paris, France, to get DRUNK with JEFFERSON. A DRUNK CELLIST battles a really DRUNK LUTHIER for control of CONGRESS. A really, really DRUNK LUTHIER must SAVE CONGRESS from MELANCHOLIA by WRITING a COMEDY-DRAMA for FRANKLIN Leonard. When DEATH falls in LOVE with a CELLIST he must choose between being IMMORTAL and LOVE. When DEATH is DIAGNOSED with LAUGHTER he must fight an IMMORTAL DRUNK NEUROSCIENTIST to reinstate his MELANCHOLIA. When a NEUROSCIENTIST with a POWERFUL LAUGHTER ENGINE threatens WASHINGTON, only a maverick LUTHIER can stop him. When the Grim REAPER makes a DECLARATION of INDEPENDENCE from DEATH he must learn how to live in the WORLD and find LOVE with a CELLIST or a LUTHIER or a NEUROSCIENTIST. Definitely a COMEDY-DRAMA. Well, some LAUGHTER at least. Hopefully. Okay, mostly MELANCHOLIA.

JEFFERSON, FRANKLIN, and WASHINGTON DISCOVER their INCURABLE PASSION for AMERICA and INDEPENDENCE is but prologue to their IMMORTAL COMPANIONSHIP — an OUTRE MARRIAGE so PERFECT it can NEVER be SEPARATED by TIME, DEATH, or act of CONGRESS. TRAPPED in a MARRIAGE lacking PASSION and DESIRE, a VIRTUOSIC CELLIST, DIAGNOSED with INCURABLE CANCER that will result in the LOSS of her hands, ENGAGES in ONE DRUNK NIGHT of DEBAUCHERY with a LUTHIER DETERMINED to FINISH ONE PERFECT Stradivarius for ANOTHER CLIENT. A POWERFUL CELLIST TAKES hostage the LUTHIER who DISCOVERS the secret to the PERFECT tone. A DETERMINED NEUROSCIENTIST SEPARATED from his CELLIST WIFE DISCOVERS that the MEANS to win back her LOVE is to CELEBRATE the LIFE of a LUTHIER DIAGNOSED with INCURABLE CANCER.

INCURABLE DRUNK LILY DISCOVERS LOVE and PASSION in LIFE only to FIND her LOVE, JEFFERSON, is DIAGNOSED with CANCER.

The PASSION of WORLD class CELLIST LILY FRANKLIN TEMPORARILY ENDS until she DECIDES to ENGAGE in a new LIFE in WASHINGTON after the sudden DEATH of her POWERFUL husband when she BECOMES DETERMINED to TAKE his seat in CONGRESS.

ONE NIGHT, FRANKLIN the LUTHIER (a Scorpio) MEETS LILY the CELLIST (a CANCER) and after they get DRUNK and CELEBRATE together, they get ENGAGEd. And then it TURNs out that they have the PERFECT MARRIAGE full of LOVE and COMPANIONSHIP destined to last until the END of TIME — which to them is literally FOREVER... since they've both DISCOVERED that they're IMMORTALs.

I would find out about this the day before the deadline! TRAPPED in a destructive RELATIONSHIP, LILY, a PASSIONate CELLIST is DETERMINED to FINALLY find LOVE before she FINISHES her WORLD tour. (Part of it could take place on a steam ENGINE.)

ONE SCIENTIST FINALLY BECOMES DRUNK enough to FINISH his TIME in CONGRESS. A NEUROSCIENTIST DISCOVERS he was WRONG about how POWERFUL word clouds are as an ENGINE of creativity. FRANKLIN'S ONE JOB is to DISCOVER what a LUTHIER actually is.

Alternately: In WASHINGTON, CONGRESS DECIDES it's the PERFECT TIME TO get DRUNK. (this is starting to turn into bad magnetic poetry).

Thanks. :)

Thank you. :)

These were posted elsewhere from benjamesesq: Grim REAPER When DEATH gets DRUNK, the hangover is IMMORTAL --- PERFECT ENDS When JEFFERSON LOVE is DIAGNOSED with INCURABLE LAUGHTER he DECIDES to SAVE the WORLD from MELANCHOLIA before he DIEs. --- NEVER LOVE Every LOVE of LILY REAPER'S LIFE has DIEd and she DECIDES she will be FOREVER MISSING COMPANIONSHIP. Until she MEETS the PERFECT French CELLIST LUTHIER OUTRE. Consumed with PASSION LILY BECOMES DETERMINED to SAVE herself from a LIFE of MELANCHOLIA. But can she risk DESIRE if it MEANS that LUTHIER must DIE?

Think I finally have a decent one... at least one that SOUNDS like a movie: LILY has FALLEN for SEPTEMBER, the WIFE of a POWERFUL WASHINGTON CONGRESSMAN. But their PASSIONate relationship can't stay secret for long... It took WAY too long for me to express that second half into words, which is a problem I've been having recently. It also doesn't help that I found this contest today, after reading that article about Big Hero 6 where they talk about pitching characters, not story, so my mind is in such a different place than what's required fot rhis.

Thanks Scott - that was me being a technical numpty, fighting with Wordpres and getting so confused I ended up posting on the wrong article (and I work in technology!!). Got there in the end and managed to post above under "Ben James"

A cancer-DIAGNOSED NEUROSCIENTIST has one week to FIND her MISSING WIFE before their child ENDS with a foster family.

When his enraged WIFE kidnaps George WASHINGTON, Thomas JEFFERSON, and Benjamin FRANKLIN, a TIME-traveler DRUNK NEUROSCIENTIST has one day to FIND them or AMERICA will cease to exist.

Desperate to SAVE AMERICA from going down the WRONG path, a DETERMINED historian enlists a POWERFUL NEUROSCIENTIST's help resurrecting JEFFERSON, FRANKLIN, and WASHINGTON in order to SAVE the country before a DRUNK, corrupt CONGRESS ENDS the WORLD.

DEATH MEETS LILY and DISCOVERS LOVE really does LIVES FOREVER in IMMORTAL COMPANIONSHIP.

An IMMORTAL CELLIST DIAGNOSED with an INCURABLE HANGOVER DECIDES he must ENGAGE the Grim REAPER in a fight as a MEANS to bring about his DEATH but before he BECOMES HISTORY he must first eat a CONTINENTAL breakfast to SAVE his stomach or risk the LOSS of his DESIRE to DIE.

When FRANKLIN ENDS up TRAPPED under a LILY pad one chilly SEPTEMBER NIGHT the MISSING turtle must SAVE himself before a POWERFUL water snake DISCOVERS him.

A DRUNK CELLIST TAKEs a WRONG TURN one NIGHT and ENDS up racing the Grim REAPER AROUND the WORLD to SAVE his IMMORTAL soul but DEATH has a POWERFUL trick up his sleeve: the FOREVER ENGINE.

My three tries: FRANKLIN RATHER, a DETERMINED WASHINGTON CELLIST, is TRAPPED in a LIFE OR DEATH COMEDY-DRAMA until he MEETS an IMMORTAL REAPER with a PASSION for SCIENCE. AMERICA WASHINGTON is ONE PERFECT DRUNK with a perpetual HANGOVER until she MEETS a POWERFUL NEUROSCIENTIST and FINALLY DISCOVERS LOVE and COMPANIONSHIP on a hot SEPTEMBER NIGHT. LILY SAVEs herself from INCURABLE MELANCHOLIA when her beLOVEd WIFE is DIAGNOSED with CANCER and she DECIDES to take a JOB WRITING about LOVE, LAUGHTER, PASSION, and DEATH for an interCONTINENTAL WORLD CLIENT, only to DISCOVER she has been TRAPPED by a POWERFUL LUTHIER DETERMINED to TAKE her INDEPENDENCE.

One more for word count: When a POWERFUL CELLIST's WIFE WRONGs a DRUNK FALLEN LUTHIER during a SEPTEMBER NIGHT of DEBAUCHERY at the CONTINENTAL CONGRESS of AMERICA WRITING JOB fair LAUGHTER ensues in this COMEDY-DRAMA that CELEBRATEs COMPANIONSHIP, DESIRE and how to LIVE LIFE in a WORLD where RELATIONSHIPs are NEVER PERFECT but are FOREVER ENHANCEd by LOVE.

REAPER FRANKLIN DEATH is hit hard with love after he meets CELLIST LILY JEFFERSON while undercover as LUTHIER. Being in LOVE RATHER then being IMMORTAL has NEVER been a harder choice.

Wow, all this WRITING makes me REALIZE a lot of people are DETERMINED to win this contest.

Here we go! When a famous CELLIST is diagnosed with INCURABLE brain CANCER, he DECIDES he must reach out to his estranged NEUROSCIENTIST daughter to help him FIND the missing notes in his last masterpiece -- and FINALLY repair their RELATIONSHIP -- before he MEETS his DEATH, in this POWERFUL story of the IMMORTAL COMPANIONSHIP between LOVE and LOSS.

Oh, I like this! I'd totally watch that movie!

ONE NIGHT a POWERFUL grim REAPER REALIZES his OUTRE PASSION for all the LIVES in the WORLD so he FOREVER ENDS his IMMORTAL DEATH JOB. He BECOMES further SEAPARTED from MELANCHOLIA when he MEETS LILY WASHINGTON, a mortician who's TRAPPED in a job that NEVER PAYS due to LOSS of CLIENTS. Grim is RATHER DETERMINED to SAVE his secret from the LOVE of his LIFE even when a NEUROSCIENTIST DISCOVERS his TEMPORALLY INDEPENDENCE from INCURABLE CANCER (he can't DIE) and vows to ENGAGE CONGRESS in a DECLARATION of war. AMERICA's future HISTORY and his RELATIONSHIP hang in the balance in this COMEDY-DRAMA.

Mourning the ENDS of their RELATIONSHIPs, a DRUNK LUTHIER and CELLIST accidentally travel back in TIME and form a POWERFUL COMPANIONSHIP with Benjamin FRANKLIN, George WASHINGTON and Thomas JEFFERSON. What starts as a NIGHT of DEBAUCHERY and DESIRE turns WRONG when the H(u)NGOVER musicians DISCOVER they're (re)WRITING HISTORY. TRAPPED in SEPTEMBER 1775, the men are DETERMINED by any MEANS necessary to SAVE the LIVES of the founding fathers and AMERICA in time for the signing of the DECLARATION OF INDEPENDENCE. (It's The HANGOVER meets Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure).

Okay, that's it! Time is up. Thanks to everyone who participated in the challenge. Winners will be announced on Monday. I hope everyone had fun. We'll do another Word Cloud Logline Challenge in December when the annual Black List is announced. Onward!