"A disparaging self-help guru..." now that is funny. They should have stopped there. The rest of the pitch sounds like a swing and a miss.

Jeff, the description of the concept rather confused me -- or perhaps it's the concept itself. Unless somehow how the Protagonist's "Inner Child" emerges as an active entity / character in which case I can start to see it, some sort of walking around ID character, expressing the P's internal desires, but creating havoc for the P in the 'real' world.