Mike at 2008-09-03 11:28:00:
Scott,

‘Alice was down the rabbit hole at the end of page one.’ just might be my new mantra...

Keep Writing,
Mike
The Moviequill at 2008-09-03 17:41:00:
awesome -- I love inspiring tips
Kiwichick at 2008-09-03 21:59:00:
Cool.

And there goes my flashback sequence ...