Tobias Svenlöv at 2013-11-08 19:39:29:
Hey!
Thanks for a great reply. I picked up 2 scripts, Batman Begins and Aliens today. They're similar to what I write about.
I noticed that my descriptions falls short, so I started to fill them out and it added another 15 pages. Now up on 85.
My fighting scenes, there a 3, are very, very short. If I can learn how to tell it like I see it, I might be able to add 10 more pages. = 95.
Clean read it again and who knows. Might be able to reach those 110 after that.
Thanks for all the information you provide! I've learned a lot.
// Speero