Tobias Svenlöv at 2013-11-08 19:39:29:
Hey! Thanks for a great reply. I picked up 2 scripts, Batman Begins and Aliens today. They're similar to what I write about. I noticed that my descriptions falls short, so I started to fill them out and it added another 15 pages. Now up on 85. My fighting scenes, there a 3, are very, very short. If I can learn how to tell it like I see it, I might be able to add 10 more pages. = 95. Clean read it again and who knows. Might be able to reach those 110 after that. Thanks for all the information you provide! I've learned a lot. // Speero
The Novice Screenwriter | If your first draft is running short… at 2013-11-13 11:50:47:
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