How about: character, need, obstacle, and a time frame (the scene is brought to an end by something) ?

Is there any shift happening? Is there a slight transformation? Do we see or feel the subtext that's enriching the scene. What is played out in the scene and how does that affect the main character?

Narrative Elements: Character (s) Visuals Action expressed in the present tense Dialogue (use of subtext) Any number of dramatic techniques - from silence to countdowns to ending on a question to others Conflict Leave the reader wanting to read the next scene