Congratulations, Janna, on tackling your story, getting your draft done, pushing yourself to make it as good as you can, and also for the self-awareness and honesty to recognize your writing strengths and weaknesses.
Most of us need help brushing up our logline writing skills, and that's why we set up a logline workshop at the
GOYOQ forum (it only shows up when you're logged in). If you'd like to get help on your own loglines or get practice by helping other writers with theirs, we'd welcome your company.
Congratulations, again. I hope you rewrite your draft to perfection and that Scott will soon be sharing the good news of your script sale with us.