dw at 2012-08-30 18:37:25:
You should come up with easier questions, Scott. This isn't my definitive answer, but off the top of my head I'll list a movie that I love that is a great screenwriting teacher, "About a Boy". It has great characters, and you get to know them right away visually in the opening montage. The dialogue is fantastic, but so are the visuals (Will walking right past the food bank, Marcus approaching the front door and Will opening it just before he rings the bell, etc.). No excess moments and everything is part of the plot (Will buys Marcus shoes, when they get stolen his mom finds out that he's been hanging out with Will; the Mystikal CD, etc.). There's a mid-point change where Will meets Rachel and repeats his mistakes from act 1. And then the hilarious/touching/clever climax pays off everything perfectly. I guess my only complaint is the denouement is a little too neat, but story wise it's still set-up and everything that comes before it is pretty freaking great.