Hi Scott, Thanks for GOYOQ and the posts that aggregate other posts - beyond helpful! Just to note, the link in this post for What is a scene is suffering gremlins. The URL it should link to is: http://gointothestory.blcklst.com/2012/08/go-on-your-own-quest-week-6-scene.html Now, back to rewriting my last scene. [Or is it a sequence?] davidbishop

David, thanks, I fixed the link. All of these GOYOQ posts are now aggregated under Lists here. I will update that list weekly.

"Enter late/exit early" is like crafting a two-minute speech as a best man rather than babbling on as the bride, groom and everyone else awkwardly wait for you to find your point. Everything you took ten minutes to say could've been said in two minutes, had you put some time and thought into it.