Vic Tional at 2012-07-23 13:48:27:
What strikes me the most when reading this screenplay is that you have to be Aaron Sorkin or someone of commensurately high standing in the screenwriting community to get away with this, and that's not meant to sound like a snipe at all. It's a masterful screenplay.
At the same time, this screenplay could easily be used as an example of what not to do, and should probably be viewed as such by aspiring scribes. Take the first scene: it's over eight pages long and features just two characters talking to each other in a bar. This is something you simply wouldn't get away with trying to break into the business with a spec screenplay. Two characters talking at length = stasis = death. Obviously it works here, and very well indeed, but I think it's fair to say a reader, going in cold, would not look favorably on a start like this, regardless of some crackling dialogue (the Stairmaster quip's a zinger).
That goes for the script length, too. 163 pages is mammoth, regardless of the genre, and even if your screenplay moves as fast and fluidly as this one does, you probably wouldn't get out of the blocks turning in something of similar length. So the ironic takeaway is 'don't do what Aaron Sorkin does'.