SabinaGiado at 2012-06-08 03:33:17:
Can't tell what genre this is. The use of the word "humans" makes me think fantasy-sci fi.
VicDiGital at 2012-06-08 09:57:31:
It's a post-apocalyptic film set after a zombie outbreak. Spoiler Alert- The person shepherding the humans is a vampire. Vampires are invisible/immune to zombies, so the vampire makes a deal with the humans to get food for them and protect them from the zombies if they allow him to drink their blood (but not fatally so). Great idea, great characters, great conflict, but the ending needs to be seriously re-worked. It just sort of... ends.. with a bland whimper. Anyone who reads even my plot synopsis will immediately imagine a dozen better ideas for a third act, and I'm sure Universal purchased this knowing they'll find someone to make the ending more dynamic.
Scott at 2012-06-08 11:38:00:
Thanks, VicDiGital, for that synopsis.
Shelly Mellott at 2012-06-08 12:09:42:
Congratulations to Larry, the 2010 Final Draft, Inc. Big Break third-place winner. He was picked up by Big Break judge Mitch Solomon at Magnet Management, and then made it to the Black List. Final Draft salutes Larry Brenner on his success!
Sean Z P Harris at 2012-06-08 13:04:13:
"It’s a post-apocalyptic film set after a zombie outbreak. Spoiler Alert- The person shepherding the humans is a vampire. Vampires are invisible/immune to zombies, so the vampire makes a deal with the humans to get food for them and protect them from the zombies if they allow him to drink their blood (but not fatally so)." Congratulations to Larry, but FUCK!!! This is almost identical to one of my loglines I sent Scott. Now I'm depressed.