Scott at 2012-04-23 19:15:20:
To frame the discussion, let me share an anecdote. Years ago, I went to a meeting at DreamWorks. The exec I met with was terribly excited. Turns out they had received a draft of a script they had been developing and it turned out fantastic, everybody loved it. He went on and on about how good it was, how the writer had nailed it.
That script was Galaxy Quest.
When you read the script, you can see why the exec was excited.
-- Strong high concept: This made marketing the movie so much easier.
-- Nicely detailed characters who all work together as an ensemble: This enabled the studio to go after multiple different actors with a dream cast [one they eventually got].
-- It's funny: Lots of great moments, scenes, set-ups and payoffs.
-- It's clever: All the way through, from concept to execution, there is an extra sheen to the story that elevates it from the broad comedy terrain.
The movie did very well more than doubling its production budget and I'm sure succeeded in the ancillary markets as well. I know many professional screenwriters who really admire the script because it is so well-written.
And here's a point I want to make: This is the kind of movie screenwriters need to be able to write. Mainstream, commercial, popcorn films.
If you want to be Tony Gilroy and that is your everlasting passion, God be with you, and go for it.
But most of the movies Hollywood studios make are much more like Galaxy Quest than Michael Clayton.
So if you aspire to write mainstream commercial Hollywood comedies, you should read and analyze scripts like GQ because within its genre, it's a quality story.