CJ at 2012-03-01 15:49:48:
I always hold out hope for any good action/adventure movie, but this summary leaves me wondering where the character arc is. He goes from a ruthless killing machine to ... a ruthless killing machine. I think stories work better when the protagonist transforms into something opposite of himself. Like a nebbishy high-schooler gaining superhuman spider powers.
Also, the summary says Bloodshot's main goal is to figure out who he was, but the problem from a story standpoint is there's no mystery there for the audience: We already know who he was. So we're twiddling our thumbs waiting for him to catch up to us in terms of knowledge. Sometimes, a situation like that, where you're two steps ahead of the main character as he finds things out, just results in boredom.
Congratulations to the writer. It's a great achievement to sell a script. I just hope these items don't become issues when he ... Goes Into the Story.