Nadria Tucker at 2012-01-25 14:06:15:
Here's my analysis of the characters and their goals. In parentheses are the goals that come from knowing Malcolm is dead.
Malcolm Crowe—30s thick, wavy hair, upper middle class, workaholic, neglectful husband, feels like a failure because he couldn't help Vincent
Goal: Help Cole, Talk to his wife [pg 102] (Realize he's dead/Move on from his death)
Cole Sear–10 years old, low-income, white, shy, problems in school but incredibly smart
Goal: Overcome his fears [42], Feel like he fits in [pg 50, 72, 73], Communicate with his mother [pg 117], (Help Malcolm [pg 96])
Vincent—19 years old, addict, murderous and suicidal
Goal: Not to be afraid, to fit in [pg 8]
Anna—pretty, upper middle class, depressed, feels guilty for wanting to date her coworker
Goal: (Move on from Malcolm's death)
Lynn—Young mother, white, low-income, confused about Cole's problem
Goal: Communicate with Cole [pg 56, 83, 99]
Mr. Marschal—Elderly, German, thinks his wife is still alive
Goal: Move on from his wife's death
Mr. Cunningham—40s, teacher, white, former stutterer
Goal: Help Cole fit in
Kara—little girl, ghost, poisoned by her mother
Goal: Tell her father what happened [pg 106]
Mrs. Collins—young mother, mentally ill (Munchausen by proxy), poisoned one daughter to death and is now poisoning the second one.
Mr. Collins—young father, grieving
Based on the stakes alone, I'd say Cole is the main character. If he fails to overcome his fear of the ghosts, of being “looked at”, of talking to his mother, then he will wind up like Vincent—dead. Stakes don't get much higher than that!
Moving on: this story is really about communication. How many of these goals are about a character talking to someone or making themselves heard? How much of the description shows characters not hearing one another? How many lines of dialogue involve characters talking about talking? All the ghosts want is to communicate with the living.
Anna seems underdeveloped, but love interests usually are, aren't they?
I also think the treatment of Mrs. Collins is a little bit harsh. Are we supposed to think she's a bad guy? How can we, when she's mentally ill? Or maybe that sequence is just supposed to show how pointless death can be? How there really is no nemesis except death itself?