Teddy Pasternak at 2011-10-24 13:40:52:
I dig Bill Lancaster's writing style. It's very precise and easy to follow. Efficient action lines and great use of secondary headings. Even though there are large blocks of descriptions in places, it doesn't feel too heavy.
I really like the opening of the script. Much better than the movie. We're really thrown into the action right away and it's a nice build until the Norwegian is shot. I like how we don't meet MacReady until page 9. In the film, they intercut the opening action with MacReady playing chess and it slows down the pace and diminishes the suspense.
MacReady comes off as a “character” in the script with his inflatable companion and Hawaiian music, and in the movie he's more of a straight up “tough guy.”
There's a really exciting set-piece in the script that I don't think is in the movie, around page 60 where they leave the station on snowmobiles and get attacked by the dogs. I like that they left for a while. It still makes it “contained” since they can't leave the continent anyway. In the movie, they don't leave the station, I believe, after returning from the Norwegian camp.
There's a growing sense of uneasiness and distrust in the second act and Lancaster did a great job of building that conflict between the men. It made me question what had I read and I tried to remember details - was he in the room with the dogs, was that guy alone, who is infected, etc.
Overall, this was a fun read and his descriptions of The Thing and the deformed dogs and men are really well-written. Watching the film now thirty years after it was made, the special effects come off as campy, but reading the script, I found myself imagining everything really vividly. The script holds up - it hasn't aged that much. In the script there's a scene with Blair looking at the cells through a microscope. In the movie, it was done with Pong-like computer graphics and feels laughably dated.