Andrew Dean at 2011-09-14 12:31:29:
Well, I think it goes as follows: Annie is obviously the protagonist, Helen, her nemesis, Rhodes is the attractor, Judy and Megan share mentor status, and Lillian is the trickster. That be the way I see it.
Batman at 2011-09-14 12:58:14:
I guess I'll agree, as I haven't seen the movie. I'm looking forward to more detailed analysis.
Tommy Lee at 2011-09-14 13:07:34:
I agree with Andrew on who is who. A lot of these characters represent one of the themes of the movie, Annie paying too much attention to the surface level things as opposed to the deeper more important things. Rhodes represents the type of guy Annie should be with. He's relationship material event though he may not have all the stuff on paper that Ted has. In the beginning Annie is with Ted for superficial reasons (good looking, successful etc.) but ignores the fact that he's a douche. She finally ends up with Rhodes because she has genuine chemistry with him. Helen is clearly the nemesis but she's a great nemesis. She is always one upping Annie, making things exceedingly more difficult. She's smart, very attractive, obnoxiously rich, puts on great parties, is the hit at the party, everything that Annie is not and wants to be. What Annie fails to realize though is that she has the history and friendship with Lillian that no one can take away from her. It takes her the whole movie to figure out that despite her lack of the superficial stuff (money, job, party planning abilities etc.) the friendship was always there. In the end Helen also realizes that she was trying to one up Annie because she was jealous of the only thing that really mattered, Annie and Lillian's deep friendship. Lillian is the trickster because she switches sides from Annie to Helen after Annie's blow up, but then realizes that Helen is full of crap and comes back to her true friend Annie. Mentors are Judy and Meghan. As it is sometimes in life, you get the best advice from the most unlikely places. Again, one can't be to artificial in judging who to listen to. I guess that's my two cents on how the characters represent the superficial/genuine dynamic in the movie.
Batman at 2011-09-14 13:10:59:
Six main characters, but only the five archetypes. This ranks with character alignment charts for those of us into those types of things.... Of course, unaligned is the way to go ;) And I don't believe in the true neutral.
Debbie Moon at 2011-09-14 13:33:14:
Thinking back to the film, the characters I came away remembering best were Annie, Helen and Megan - Annie obviously because she has the most screen time, because she was such a good nemesis (she wanted exactly what Annie wanted, and she was better equipped to get it), and Megan.... well, because she was brilliant. I actually found Rhodes kind of annoying. A bit artificially quirky. But that was probably just me.
Crimson Python at 2011-09-14 13:44:25:
Helen was a great nemesis. I liked that they added how her stepkids hate her in the movie. That stuck with me and really resonated when she admitted to not really having friends. (movie not script) I also found it interesting in the backwoods tire changing scene that was in the script.. that all the other bridesmaids started turning against Helen. But, then they all sort of rallied together as a group to fight off the trans am guy who stops to "help". And I'm seeing that one of the bridesmaids from the script was deleted, correct? Dana was removed and Leslie's name was changed to Rita?
CP at 2011-09-14 13:48:16:
Something seemed a little off for me too, regarding Rhodes.
Scott at 2011-09-14 13:48:28:
I concur with Andrew and Tommy Lee. Let me add one comment for now. Archetypes, like characters, can have endless different 'shades,' each one a unique persona in their own way. For example, Rhodes is an Attractor. But isn't it fair to say that Ted is, too? An Attractor is a character who is most intimately tied to the Protagonist's emotional development (heart). Isn't there a battle over Annie's heart, a war she is waging within herself, but physicalized in the form of Ted v. Rhodes? Ted represents Fantasy Lover: great looks, great house, great income, great in bed. Rhodes represents Authentic Lover: none of the above, but he actually is there for Annie, accepts her for who she is, persistent in pursuing her, even forgives her after the whole hickey confusion thing. So we can look at Ted as a Dark [Negative] Attractor and Rhodes as a Light [Positive] Attractor.
Scott at 2011-09-14 16:23:38:
I think you're right. I had mentally crossed out Dana and replaced with Rita, but I think Leslie became Rita and Dana was vanished into thin air. Probably due to a concern of too many characters or maybe not distinct enough compared to others.
Scott at 2011-09-14 16:25:10:
Rhodes is, let's face it, a bit weird. But I wonder if they did that for (A) comedic reasons and (B) to really push Annie re her fantasy notions of romance. If Rhodes had been, say, a normal guy, much easier for her to renounce Ted and go with Rhodes. But Rhodes' weirdness makes it a more difficult choice for Annie.
Teddy Pasternak at 2011-09-14 16:50:48:
I have a problem with having a pre-set category for the different type of characters. Yes, in Bridesmaids, there are clear-cut types; Helen is the Nemesis and I agree about Ted and Rhodes both being Attractors. However, it seems that you start out with these archetypes and then look for them in each story. To me, that's a bit backwards. Each character (if they're well written) reveals their function as the story progresses, and if the story doesn't include the usual suspects such as Tricksters and Mentors, that's fine. I don't go into it looking to categorize each character. I agree that each character should have a function. Even if they're not directly tied to the plot. It's not “cheating” as was mentioned yesterday. Cheating implies that there are set rules that you have to follow to achieve a goal, and that you're breaking those rules to achieve that goal. There are plenty of examples where a character's function is not directly tied to the main plot and is there only to show how the primary character would react in a situation, for instance. The Daily Dialogue from yesterday Happy-Go-Lucky is a great example of this. There's very little plot going on in that film, it's a character study, and each supporting character is there to show how Poppy reacts in various situations and how she deals with problem solving. There are no transformations to speak of either. In that film, I think it'd be difficult to find these character archetypes. And of course, I know you're not saying that EVERY story HAS to have these archetypes, but following this site for a while I do get the feeling that you're seeing it from that angle for the most part. I'm guessing this is part of the Joseph Campbell school of thought? But it could also be that the types of films we mostly discuss here (the standard Hollywood fare) are perfect for this type of categorization. I would say that the best written stories have characters that are multi-faceted and has maybe not so easily put in a box, or like you said “different shades.” I've come to know you as someone who always say that rules should be taken with a ton of salt and whatever works works, so it surprises me when I see your list with the five primary archetypes. And I know, it's not a rule, just an observation on your part of types of characters the are often used in stories, but it just seems so simplified. Am I over-thinking it? I usually do. Do you see a difference between a Protagonist and a Main Character? In my view they are not always the same. In Bridesmaids, yes. Go Annie! But in many other stories, they are two separate entities. We had this discussion a while back regarding Rise of the Planet of the Apes and what you called “dual protagonists”. I made a comment calling Caesar the Protagonist and Franco the Main Character. This was before I saw the film and I predicted that Caesar would have the transformation but we would experience the story through Franco's eyes. After seeing the film, I'm not so sure. Did Franco transform? Are there two protagonists of equal value? Is one the Main Character? Is it just semantics?
Scott at 2011-09-14 17:13:26:
Great questions, Teddy. I'm tied up for the next several hours, but I promise to get back to you with some thoughts by tonight or tomorrow. If I space it out and forget, please ping me. But super quick, the archetypes arise originally with what Campbell discussed, then forgotten for decades, emerging as I watched a zillion movies and saw the same pattern of narrative functions over and over and over again, then completely came into view when I read Jung, and this emerging idea about story as psychological journey. No, they are not rules. And yes, archetypes can be used poorly or ineffectively, just as structural paradigms can. They are tools. And I believe can be extremely helpful in digging into characters to identify their core essence from which you can build up and out each character so they work in concert with each other, providing their own respective function to the overall narrative. More later.
Atlanta at 2011-09-14 17:50:36:
How about roommate Steve as mentor? He tells Annie, "maybe it's your attitude" [why you're having shitty days], and helps her figure out path back to college.
CP at 2011-09-14 20:38:37:
I've always thought of archetypes as sort of foundations for creating characters.. a starting point. And you can build any house (character) on top of that. Some stories never really get past that slab of concrete. And those characters are flat and cliche. And Teddy is right.. some stories can't follow those five archetypes. But, I think those archetypes are so broad that if you look hard enough you can find at least one character to fit each archetype.. However, does that mean that everyone who gives advice is a mentor? I'm not sure. For instance, doesn't Annie's Boss give her some words of wisdom after she gets fired? Would she be a mentor too? Or does one piece of advice not equal to mentor status and that character is merely there to advance transformation in the Protag?
Josh K-sky at 2011-09-14 21:39:26:
Picking up from the discussion on structure and differences in the script, one of the strongest changes was the resolution of the Helen story. The bones of it are all here in the we-slapped-this-together-this-morning draft, but it's clear that Annie's final battle with her nemesis is much more deeply felt in the final movie. In the script, Annie's defeat of Helen is more or less accidental: at the end of the day, Helen overdoes it and drives Lillian away, and Annie's there to pick up the pieces. Because it's a comedy, there's a redemptive moment for Helen, but it's in the form of banding together to fight off a random attacker in the woods. In the movie, Annie's final triumph over Helen is both reasserting herself as a friend -- she's able to find Lillian because she knows her best -- but also in becoming strong enough to see Helen as vulnerable despite all the ways in which they've clashed over status up until that point. Much stronger than pushing Helen out of the fold and bringing her back in through physical derring-do is the movie's resolution based in acceptance of self and other. It's much more like the resolution between Protagonist and Antagonist in romantic comedies -- Billy Mernit calls it "joyous defeat".
Scott at 2011-09-14 22:34:21:
Atlanta, good point. And how about this? What TV shows does Steve constantly watch? Home improvement series. Hel-lo. A clue to Annie? Like improve your own home life?
Scott at 2011-09-14 22:40:48:
Excellent, Josh. That's one of the most important improvements between script and screen as far as I'm concerned: Sharpening the Annie-Helen relationship and especially Helen's culpability in the Lillian estrangement, clearing the way for Helen to ride in as a 'white knight,' representing genuine friendship [with Lillian] as opposed to the fake baubles and sparkle of the wedding. Hey, I think I just had a revelation: Doesn't Lillian have a revelation about the romantic notion of a wedding [represented by Helen] versus true friendship [represented by Annie]. And doesn't that parallel what Annie learns: the romantic notion of love [represented by Ted] versus true love [represented by Rhodes]. And to go further, I think you could add the idea that seeing what Lillian learns reinforces what Annie needs to learn, that is contributes to her ability to choose Rhodes Does that make sense?
Scott at 2011-09-14 22:46:05:
I will post a separate comment with a larger take on archetypes, but CP, that is my attitude: Archetypes as foundations for developing characters. Use them as tools to drill down into characters. More later.
Caitlin Podiak at 2011-09-14 23:16:58:
I'm always grumping about flatly written girlfriend characters, and I felt like Rhodes was the reverse of that. Kind of like the male version of a manic pixie dream girl?
Scott at 2011-09-15 02:28:24:
Okay, it's late and I've had a really long day, but I do want to follow up the discussion in this thread. First off, excellent insights and analysis during our discussion of "Bridesmaids." It heartens me that despite some of the obvious story issues in the "Bridesmaids" draft we read, you have been able to see much of the solid elements in place in that script which not only contributed to the movie, but also caught the eye of script development people in Hollywood, letting them know they had a winning project on their hands. Now as to character archetypes: I have gotten into this several times before, but as it's good for me to continue to refine my thoughts, let me take a whack at here again. The concept of three movements in a story is universal to most stories. Call it Beginning, Middle, End... Separation, Departure, Return... Thesis, Antithesis, Synthesis... or my own take on Jung -- Invitation, Immersion, Integration... pretty much every story shares this three movement structure. I assert that likewise most stories have a structure in terms of their primary characters, specifically five of them: Protagonist, Nemesis, Attractor, Mentor, Trickster. These are not arbitrary but a reflection of the fact that the most universal narrative dynamic is metamorphosis. And in order for the Protagonist to go through a metamorphosis, they almost always need to have those five character functions in the narrative: Protagonist: Generally the central character in a story, the one who goes through the most significant metamorphosis. Nemesis: Can be seen as a projection of the Protagonist's 'shadow' [dark] self. Attractor: Character most intimately involved in the P's emotional development. Mentor: Character most intimately involved in the P's intellectual development. Trickster: Character who tests the P, switching from ally to enemy, enemy to ally. So in response to the question about the artificiality of these five archetypes, I would argue precisely the opposite: In most stories (and certainly most mainstream commercial movies), these archetypes exist as a result of the organic nature of the metamorphosis dynamic. After I had been working with these ideas for a few years, I dug into C.G. Jung and there discovered some mind-blowing ideas to support my own. Of course, Jung is heavily into the concept of archetypes, the fact they are grounded in our collective unconscious, and carry psychological and symbolic echoes from generations gone by (imbuing them with power in the stories we write). But the thing of Jung which completely knocked me out is this idea: Jung said that our task as human beings is to be involved in the process of individuation. In one major respect, this involves each of us becoming aware of all the aspects of our psyche and eventually engaging and embracing them. If we do not do that, he asserted that the universe will create circumstances that force us to do so. If we apply that idea as writers to our stories, we can ask an incredibly revelatory question: Why does THIS story HAVE to happen to THIS character at THIS time? In other words, everything in a character's life leading up to FADE IN has brought them to this specific point in their psychological development. And now the universe does something big -- BOOM! -- to force the character to go on a psychological journey leading to metamorphosis. Consider "Gladiator": Maximus is offered becoming emperor, only to have -- BOOM! -- Commodus kill Marcus, attempt to assassinate Maximus, and have his family slaughtered. Why? In the Plotline to create his revenge goal. In the Themeline to force him to confront all aspects of his psyche to go from soldier to impassive / lost soul to gladiator to warrior / angel of retribution. In "Bridesmaids": Annie has a shitty little life. Then BOOM! She is offered the Maid of Honor gig. Plotline: She tries to take care of those responsibilities. Themeline: She is forced to deal with fundamental Disunity of her failed life, reject her infantile romantic notions of love, and embrace authentic aspects of who she is within, leading to the bakery gig, going back to school and rejecting Ted in favor of Rhodes as a lover. In both of those movies, as articulated by others, we see the five primary character archetypes at work. We will see them again in "Good Will Hunting." We will see them again in "The Silence of the Lambs." I contend we see them in a majority of mainstream movies. So a lot of verbiage, but there is the core of my take on archetypes. There are other important points including the fact that characters can wear 'masks' -- adopt this archetype or that from this scene to that -- but that's for another time. Echoing a point made by CP, archetypes are the foundation of the understanding of our characters and their functions in our stories. And with that, I bid you all a good night and creative dreams.
Atlanta at 2011-09-15 09:56:09:
So cogent at 2:28, impressive, Scott :-). So side characters exist to reflect the protagonist, like shards of mirror dancing around the hero, reflecting full range of character aspects, facilitating our being witness to the protagonist's arc. Makes sense, and illuminating, thank you for sharing.
Crimson Python at 2011-09-15 10:31:53:
I can see the Shades being used with the Attractor (Dark/Negative & Light/Positive). And I can see it used with the Mentor. But, what about the Trickster? Since that archetype seems to be grounded in the idea that they flip-flop from Dark to Light? Are there Dark Tricksters and Light Tricksters.. I mean, I guess there are.. This is probably more simple than I'm letting it be.
Neil Kant at 2011-09-15 10:50:03:
That was a cohesive, clear theory of storytelling, Scott. I'm inspired to write! "Jung said that our task as human beings is to be involved in the process of individuation. In one major respect, this involves each of us becoming aware of all the aspects of our psyche and eventually engaging and embracing them. If we do not do that, he asserted that the universe will create circumstances that force us to do so." Where can I read more about this specific idea?
Scott at 2011-09-15 11:47:39:
That is a terrific way of phrasing, Atlanta: "shards of mirror dancing around the hero, reflecting full range of character aspects, facilitating our being witness to the protagonist's arc." Lovely. This all goes to the idea I'm developing for my screenwriting book -- story as psychological journey. If you take a meta view, why do writers tell stories? It's not to describe a character who does not evolve or change (unless the story is about how they act as a change agent to other characters). No, we are drawn to tell stories about characters who do change. And the best stories, I would argue, are not just about a generic change or a generic character flaw, but those that go directly at the essence of the character's disunity, how they have been living with a fractured psyche, whether they know it or not, and something happens that causes / forces them to confront the circumstances of that 'something happening' [Plotline], but also the underlying psychological, emotional, and spiritual dynamics in their own metamorphosis-journey. In most movies we see that reflected in the cast of characters surrounding the Protagonist, as I've outlined above. I find this whole area to be tremendously exciting because it represents a whole new way of looking at the story-crafting process, not just another structural template, but in my view a character-based approach to story, one in which that old axiom -- Character = Plot -- actually works. You start with the Protagonist and who they are as a character, then everything flows from there.
Scott at 2011-09-15 11:56:23:
Crimson, it stands to reason there can be Dark Tricksters and Light Tricksters, just like there can be Dark Mentors and Light Mentors, Dark Attractors and Light Attractors, because character archetypes, are multifacted and multilayered just like any 'real' character, will have all sorts of shades in the spectrum of Black to White. For example, Han Solo in "Star Wars: Episode IV -- A New Hope" is a Trickster. He's an ally to Luke, he's an enemy to Luke, he is out for his own goals (money), then shows up at the very end to blast away the Bad Guys' spaceships enabling Luke to fire the bomb that destroys the Death Star. Well, in that respect, I would say because he provides a substantive benefit for Luke's goal, he's a Light Trickster. On the other hand, perhaps the most important Trickster figure of all is Judas Iscariot. By identifying Jesus to the Roman authorities (by kissing Jesus on the cheek), that leads to Jesus being crucified. Strictly in terms of Jesus as a Protagonist figure in that story, one could safely argue that Judas is a Dark Trickster.
Scott at 2011-09-15 11:59:53:
Neil, my book when it comes out [I'm working up the proposal now]. In advance of that, do a Google search of this site with these key words: Jung individuation character archetypes metamorphosis psychological journey I have analyzed several movies using the five primary character archetypes including True Grit, The Town, Inception, The Apartment, The Shawshank Redemption, The Wizard of Oz, Casablanca, The Silence of the Lambs, and others. You can Google search those individual titles, too.
Teddy Pasternak at 2011-09-15 12:10:10:
I am sure that all of us could find hundreds if not thousands of stories that do follow these paradigms, and we could also find plenty of examples that do not. My point yesterday was not whether or not most stories have these archetypes or follow certain structures, because I think you're right, they do, especially in mainstream movies. The issue I have is when you go into an analysis expecting these archetypes to be there. If you conduct a science experiment you cannot have preconceived expectations of the result. It should be a blank slate. The results present themselves to you and then you draw conclusions based on those results. To me, the same goes for story analysis. You should not look for evidence to support your theory. That's what I don't like about presenting a list of common character types and then asking your readers to find them in the story. It's a bit like multiple choice questions. It posits that these elements are in there somewhere if you look hard enough, and that is evidenced by some of the comments in this thread. Scott, you know how much I respect you and enjoy this site so I don't want to sound like I'm picking a fight. I just think it's crucial to go into each analysis with a completely open mind. That includes not assuming that every story is about metamorphosis. This entire theory seems to be built on that premise. I do agree that most stories that we are drawn to are about change and we enjoy experiencing those character arcs, but still, story analysis has to be neutral no matter what the majority of movies are about.
Scott at 2011-09-15 13:10:20:
Teddy, I have to run to a meeting and I know we're engaging in an important discussion, one in which there is no absolute 'right' or 'wrong.' Two quick things: (1) I guess there are times when a moviegoer enters a theater with a "neutral" perspective about a movie, however I figure in most cases -- because of marketing, their interest in the actors, the director, the story, genre, whatever -- when the lights dim and the film starts, we do have expectations. Moreover since by the time a student graduates from college, they will have heard, read, seen or experienced some 10,000 stories (I saw this figure somewhere), each of us has intuited certain elements about Story. And we bring that with us, conscious or subconscious, into the movie-watching experience. Finally we bring our own life-experience to a movie as well. So while there may be some value in attempting to be 'neutral' when going about the business of analyzing a movie, I'm not sure that is, in fact, possible. (2) Please give me an example of a movie that is not about metamorphosis. Either the Protagonist goes through a metamorphosis, or they act as a change agent to others, or they go through a negative metamorphosis, or they resist the call to change. I'm guessing there are some movies -- and I'm talking movies here, not books or plays or short stories -- but I think I am safe in saying that a vast majority of movies, and certainly Hollywood movies have at their core a metamorphosis dynamic. Joseph Campbell himself said that transformation -- his word -- is the central dynamic of The Hero's Journey: The Hero departs their Old World, enters a New World, goes through a series of incidents, each of which impacts the Hero at their core, then returns Home a transformed individual. Indeed Campbell wrote a book called "Transformation Myths Through Time" which gets very much into this idea. I don't think metamorphosis as the most universal narrative dynamic is an arbitrary phenomenon, rather I believe it speaks to our innate human experience. We witness change every moment of every day. We experience it over the course of our lives. And most importantly, we want to believe we can change, know how to change, to become that to which we aspire, to awaken our Inner Hero, and be transformed. It's at the core of that psychological magic where it's not Luke Skywalker or Clarice Starling or Annie in "Bridesmaids" on the screen, it's us, through our identification with that character, we experience something of what they experience. And to the degree we see through the magic of a 2-hour movie a character transform from Psyche State A (beginning) to Psyche State Z (ending), that reinforces our own hopes and dreams that we can change. That is one of the most fundamental powers of story -- to inspire us, to inform us, and do so in an entertaining fashion. Tell you what: Come up with a movie -- not some esoteric, experimental indie arthouse film, but a mainstream film -- that is not about metamorphosis as I detailed above, and let's analyze it. Let's see how and why it works. That could be an excellent learning experience. Finally this: The subtext of what I hear you saying is this: "Scott, let's not cheapen the storycrafting and filmmaking experience by reducing everything down to five character archetypes and one narrative dynamic (metamorphosis)." And I concur 100%. However let me say that is not my intention -- at all! -- nor do I think properly understood is it possible to do that with these core ideas. Rather they are about going into the story [shameless plug] to uncover its essence and the essence of each character, to understand them as deeply as we need to (depending upon genre) in order to craft a character-based story in which plot emerges from characters. So what I'm suggesting is this approach offers a way to do precisely the opposite of what you may be fearful of, reducing story to simplistic elements. The content requires a broader canvas. I can only get into it in dashes, bits and pieces on the blog. But fundamentally I think at the base, we are having an agreement. You love movies. I love movies. We both want to see great movies produced, not formulaic clattertrap. I'm hopeful that these ideas I'm working on can provide an alternative to all the various structural paradigm approaches and provide a way to craft stories through characters, thereby naturally giving the story a vitality and direction deriving from those characters. I'm not saying everyone will resonate with it. But I know already through my work as a teacher it has with many writers. Okay, I've gone on for far too long and really have to run. Look forward to your response. Let's keep the dialogue alive! [Forgive any typos. Did not have time to edit.]
Atlanta at 2011-09-15 15:07:30:
Shards of mirror spinning around someone, image popped into my head years ago, watching someone be unkind to someone kind, not seeing the loving gesture, instead seeing attack. Occurred to me, we see what we want to see, will find reflections, however faulty or askew, that support our premise. More recently I've been mulling notion of reflection, as a locational device, a compass, for ourselves. I've lost two people I was closest to, unexpectedly, mix that in with being a parent (everyday seeing even more about life and people), I've realized even folks not reliant on reflections (extreme polar example, kardashians) use reflections to stay on course, to retain sense of who they are, seeing themselves, who they know themselves to be, reflected in their friends' eyes. And designing/reverse-engineering characters to serve as proxy for the full range of individual psychological aspects, brilliant. Lets us distill to a meager 90 pages or so a fulfilling and enriching and hopefully universal experience for audience.
Atlanta at 2011-09-15 15:09:16:
Hey Teddy, love your posts, I had trouble with this one too, looking for fixed shapes in complex life-filled organically-shaped and infinitely different stories. I'm no expert on writing, as you and Scott are, and my first language is not english (feel like an idiot much of the time), but I know design, and I'm good at deconstructing, and I always got a metaphor, maybe of use. For stories, so few pages allowed, we pack weekend bags, not a lot of room, how to get the most complex life filled story into that tiny bag. And one that will serve as such a strong template that it won't get f*cked up by all the folks who come after (who will actually bring it to life). As few items as possible. And instead of intuiting it all the way through (totally doable, with talent and smart and savvy), why not use framework of psychological construct to ensure you've packed all the necessary items, and distilled them in such a way they're comprehensible to audience. In design, the rule is if something is kinda like something else, cut it, or make it more different. Did you know in navigation, 6-7 items is the max you want to use? All we can take in at one time, more than that slows down the audience, confuses, less engagement. Distilled to as few moving components as possible. Course the real magic is taking all those pieces, and then reinvigorating them with life through the words you put on the page. Alternate metaphor, the universe, serene nothingness de-evolves into infinite bits of chaos that reform, thanks to hydrogen's sexy pull, into planets and universes that we can comprehend. We're doing that in reverse with stories, creating those planets and universe that will have a universal experience/impact in the end user.
Anna Kelian at 2011-09-15 15:15:43:
Great analysis guys! We are really learning a lot from these sessions. About these archetypes: I don’t think we should make a big deal of them. There are no rules to great stories, right. But, what we are doing here is not critiquing, but analyzing, simply to see what factors made these movies great or what made them flop. We might never know for sure, but we, aspiring screenwriters, try to understand these things so we can write movies that will make it and not break it. We’ve seen movies that lack structure, yet are top hits at the B.O., while other great stories scored disappointments. This year we had many such surprises: “The Help” (we should definitely analyze this) did extraordinary while “Super 8” didn’t. And what a flop was “Conan the Barbarian”. Why? Hopefully, analysis will help us understand some aspect of it, and as Scott said above: expectations do play a part; so do our life-experiences. Has anyone here ever seen a great movie where you could easily match the characters to an archetype? I don’t think so. Because a great movie or story (one with subplots, not just a tale) has complex characters. That’s what makes them well rounded and not cardboard. However, each character, as Scott suggests (as do many screenwriting gurus) has a main function in the overall story while he/she assumes various functions or roles in subplots. Some secondary characters adopt a different function per scene. We can sort characters in many categories: As simple as: Protagonist (drives the plot forward) vs. Antagonist (tries to stop him). Or as detailed as The Myers-Briggs Type Indicator: The Duty Fulfiller or Detective - “I do everything right”, The Guardian or Overseer - “I am in control”, The Nurturer or Defender - “Nobody can get along without me”, The Caregiver or Loyalist - “Everyone likes me and wants to be like me”, The Mechanic or Artisan - “I can make anything work”, The Doer or Promoter - “I’m a stud and the world revolves around me”, The Performer or Entertainer - “I am the most glamorous”, The Artist or Composer - “Nobody has better taste than I do”, The Executive or Director - “I am all-powerful”, The Scientist or Wizard - “I am all-knowing”, The Visionary or Inventor - “I can come up with a solution for anything”, The Thinker or Architect - “I’m brilliant and you should bow to my genius”, The Giver or - “I can teach anyone anything”, The Protector or Mentor - “I have the best intentions”, The Inspirer or Motivator - “I have the most enthusiasm”, The Idealist or Actor - “I have the most sensitive conscience”. Here, we are using a middle solution: Protagonist: The lead character - Nemesis: Provides opposition to the Protagonist - Attractor: tied to the Protagonist’s emotional development, Heart – Mentor: tied to the Protagonist’s intellectual development, Head - Trickster: Characters who test the Protagonist. This approach is preferred when analyzing a story simply because it dresses the primary characters with the main functions that are present in any real, believable situation involving a need to be met by facing conflicts. This is what happens in real life. Ex. Situation: competition to win an internship. P: wants internship. N: either wants internship or doesn’t want P to get it. M: says go for it. A: I’m here for you T: routes for you while helping N cheat…. So, I agree with Scott, characters must have a function, a role in a successful story whether they are archetypes (Nemesis, Attractor,…) or complex characters (share characteristics of many archetypes). This isn’t a rule, but a fact that exists in real life. It all has to do with whose story it is and what’s the vantage point of the observer. I might be my sister’s mentor, she might be my trickster. However, my colleague might be my Nemesis and yet give me advice on how to be a successful saleswoman (mentor). Looking at the Bridesmaids script we read, Annie is the protagonist with the goal of doing a great job as Maid of Honor (better than Helen). Helen becomes her Nemesis because she tries to steal Annie’s role by helping Annie make a fool of herself. She’s a great Nemesis also because she embodies everything Annie yearns for in life. In this plot, the Attractor might be Lillian since both girls are fighting to become her best friend (Relationships among women) (re main plotline. In the themeline, the Attractors are Ted, Mike and Rhodes) [though none of the guys ever talks about love, hah!] @Scott: can we consider Lillian as an Attractor here or am I looking at it from a weak angle? In the script, we have many secondary characters adopting the function of the mentor in different situations throughout the themeline: Steve, Donna, Laurie, Judy, even Rhodes (in the Movie, Megan might be it). The trickster (in the movie) is Lillian again since she replaces Annie with Helen. (re protagonist’s goal).In the script, to be honest, I have no clue who plays this role. POINT TO PONDER: Since, only one bridesmaid is a primary character in this script (2 in the movie), I wonder why the movie is called Bridesmaids. In this movie, many pointed out that some subplots simply don’t connect with the main plot. I noticed that as well. However, I later realized that in this story, the main character, Annie, doesn’t simply step into the New World of Weddings and parties and forget about her ordinary world. In fact her shitty world haunts her even when she’s trying to concentrate on her Maid of Honor duties. She meets Rhodes because of her shitty car taillights, Steve reminds her of her shitty financial life… This makes the movie more realistic (it’s not just a “joke” movie, it has truth in its core) and at the same time funnier as it helps us understand why Annie acts the way she does in the bridal shop (dress price), in Vegas (ex. hotel)… I think I just blabbed up there. It’s just a freewriting of what I thought about the subject.
Anna Kelian at 2011-09-15 15:22:25:
@Scott: Please could you install a "Subscribe to Comments" plugin to this blog (if it's possible). That way we could follow replies to our comments as well as the other comments following ours by mail. Thanks.
Josh K-sky at 2011-09-15 16:37:32:
I think that's about right. I'm trying to remember from the film whether there's an actual line of dialogue between Annie and Lillian at the end that pays off with Annie and Rhodes, or if it's all just on the same trajectory of metamorphosis.
Teddy Pasternak at 2011-09-15 16:43:28:
You're right about the “expectations”, we all have our own life experiences and views on stories so that will color our perceptions when we analyze not just stories but all aspects of our surroundings. It is near impossible to be neutral. And the way you're explaining metamorphosis is a much broader interpretation than I had. And needless to say, you have decades more experience than I do when it comes to analyzing movies so by all means, mop the floor with me ;) But the subtext, yeah, that's it. I don't want to jump the gun since we will read this in a couple of weeks, but you mentioned Clarice Starling in Silence of the Lambs, a movie I know you love and are very familiar with. What is the metamorphosis there? It seems to me that Clarice stays the same the entire film. Lecter stays the same. Buffalo Bill certainly doesn't change. Crawford? Chilton? Clarice confronts her past but does that count as transformation? The fact that she confronts her past does not impact her actions or anyone else in the story. She remains steadfast. Her fears of not being adequate as an FBI agent or feeling inferior because of her gender or whatever work-related issues she has are minor, really. I know she's portrayed as an underdog in the beginning of the film, but she's already among the top in her class and her superiors obviously believe in her enough to assign her the Lecter interview. There was never any doubt that she would graduate from the academy. Does the fact that Clarice confront her past transform her in any way? I would say it doesn't. It impacts the plot since Lecter gives her clues that will lead her to find Buffalo Bill, but that's it. In fact, when Lecter asks her at the end of the movie if the lambs are still screaming, she can't answer and we realize that she has not overcome her childhood trauma. The fear is still there. In the end she hasn't changed the way she sees the world and is the same as she was in the beginning of the film. Is there a metamorphosis here that I'm missing? School me, please.
Teddy Pasternak at 2011-09-15 16:46:29:
Anna, at the bottom of the original post, click on the RSS 2.0 link. Then click Subscribe In Mail on the right side column.
Crimson Python at 2011-09-15 17:10:19:
The Attractor ties into the Emotional growth and the Mentor the intellectual growth.. would be the emotional and intellectual growth needed tie into the Protag's fatal flaw? Or would these be separate problems that need to be worked on? Or would the intellectual growth be more about learning a skill? Or maybe I need to be asking this: What do you guys think was Annie's emotional growth and what was her intellectual growth?
Scott at 2011-09-15 19:07:57:
"School me, please." Oh boy. When we get to "The Silence of the Lambs," which in my view slots perfectly into everything I know and teach about metamorphosis, character archetypes, and psychological journey, I will be DELIGHTED to analyze / discuss the hell out of that script and movie. You may agree, you may disagree, but one thing's for sure: It's one of those stories that keeps revealing itself upon deeper analysis. But first next week: "Good Will Hunting."
Scott at 2011-09-15 19:23:45:
Sorry about how you've lost two close people. Our family is going through something really challenging just now. I can't get into it, but my wife and youngest son are in CA with my sister-in-law and her family, something very sudden and scary from a medical standpoint, but hopefully will resolve well. All of which reminds us: Life is a thread. We think we walk on solid ground, but we're just dangling. When Jung talks about the process of individuation, he perceives nothing being more important than that. Campbell said much the same thing. I paraphrase: "Our task as human beings is not to save the world, but save our own souls." Stories speak to that, movies in a unique way. We enter into the lives of these characters and see them confront challenges, then react, over and over again, and in time they almost always change psychologically. This idea of Jung's -- that if we do not engage ALL aspects of our psyche, the universe will create circumstances to FORCE us to -- that's not just about events, that's also about the people who end up in our lives. We project something of our psyche-journey onto them, but we also attract them. And us to them on THEIR individuation process. Imagine a world where every person had the opportunity and support to get their soul-shit together. This is the way of Buddhism and psychoanalysis: Engaging the Self. And even in a lighthearted romp like "Bridesmaids," we see that dynamic at work: Annie forced to confront herself. The movie doesn't spin a particularly complex psychological web, but Annie goes on a psychological journey, yes? There is just enough emotional resonance there with her inner work to support the central story concept, the humor, the situations, the characters to give the movie that extra level of something special and transform it from a decent comedy to a really good comedy. So when you look at those one-sheets with all the characters: The Wild Card, The Innocent One, A Real Mother, Little Miss Perfect and so on, however the filmmakers got there, they created a tableau of characters that ultimately fueled Annie's metamorphosis journey. That may not have been top of mind. That may have been entirely unconscious or instinctual. But it's there.
Scott at 2011-09-15 19:32:03:
Anna, I just had time to scan your post. Will definitely require another fuller read! But let me chime in with an agreement here in this way: Whatever 'tools' we use to write stories, they are ultimately metaphors. Archetypes? Metaphors. Metamorphosis? Metaphor. Three act structure, eight sequences, twelve or seventeen stages, twenty two steps, forty beats or whatever structural paradigm? Metaphor. When we embrace them as part of the organic nature of creativity, we are okay. If we choose to look at them as literal truth, that's when our writing becomes formulaic. And yet there IS something about these particular metaphors that seem to be connected to some universal dynamics. Jung asserted that by working with archetypes, we actually draw upon their power in the collective unconscious. So when we deal with a Protagonist, each of us can identify with that archetype because we see ourselves in that character. Much more to discuss and digest. Ah, I wish TIME was a metaphor, then I wouldn't have to deal with it in such a literal way!
Scott at 2011-09-15 19:34:27:
Anna, I asked Dino about that. But I see where Teddy P says you can use the RSS feed to do that with any comment thread. Let me know if that works.
Anna Kelian at 2011-09-16 01:15:53:
Works ok. thx
Anna Kelian at 2011-09-16 01:16:13:
Works great. Thanks
Anna Kelian at 2011-09-16 01:22:28:
"When we embrace them as part of the organic nature of creativity, we are okay. If we choose to look at them as literal truth, that’s when our writing becomes formulaic." Wow, nicely put. And METAPHOR (reminds me of Il Postino)! Exactly, I just couldn't find that word. Thanks Scott.