Teddy Pasternak at 2011-06-05 17:24:15:
Great list! This guy knows his stuff. It's all good advice, but a couple of them spoke to me:
Number 13. “In A Story, Tell Only The Story”
That's the way I see it too. Lines that form a pattern. Lines that weave together. Much like a well orchestrated piece of music where all the melody lines come together and create a larger harmonious whole. It's really satisfying for the audience when all the pieces of the story fall into place like pieces in a puzzle and they realize that everything was there for a reason.
Number 22. “Treat Place Like Character”
This is something I struggle with. A lot of times my characters seem to be operating in a vacuum or in empty rooms with white walls. I'm getting better at it but it's a challenge sometimes.