Erin at 2011-03-16 09:35:17:
The show I’m currently writing is very dialogue-driven so that sense of rhythm has to be its foundation. So when writing the scene, I figure out the intent and then just go. Some scenes happen quickly, others take more time and the best part about the painstaking ones are moments of going through it over and over and finding out what’s muddling up the rhythm. It’s usually loose words or unnecessary lines. Once those are cut or words are replaced and fixed up, it flows.
Luckily, we’ve cast actors who are very respectful of the script. They say it word for word (and for the first time ever, I’m absolutely comfortable correcting them if they change something I’ve written). Also, if a line doesn’t feel right to them, we’ll discuss and if the point is valid, we’ll change something around – as long as it doesn’t interrupt the flow of the scene.