Danny at 2011-02-11 17:13:54:
Completely agreed Scott. I recently wrote a little rant against some of the "if it can't be shot, don't write it" jargon that a few of my older Ucla profs preach, especially when it comes to spec scripts.
Check this excerpt from "air force one". Beautiful "literary style":
"Papers containing NUCLEAR WAR STRATEGIES and MISSILE LAUNCH CODES slide into the hungry Shredding machine. Perkins manages a slight smile before he keels over dead, his duty fulfilled. The shredded remains of the nuclear football rain over his head like tickertape at a hero's parade."
That's how one evokes the readers eye.
---whenbadideasgobad.blogspot.com